Fraz thanks man
Thanatos Good crit man, some of my stuf isnt quite as flowing as i would like.
Pencil stuff. Pretty pleased. Second one is ruushed. The second thing here is an example of why my lines need to flow more.
Finished my A4 sketchbook and found this great A5 hardback one lying around that I can use to just do portraits of people and just generally take with me. Here are some sketches of my family watching tv. All around 20 mins, got all 3 done in the hour program.
How neat, it's cool to find another teen artist here. I'm 17.
Anyways great sketchbook! I really like your last sketch.
I really need to start drawing from real life more.
Will update sometime soon.
Your drawings from life are really well done; very realistic, and the shading looks great. Hmm, those last few drawings only took you 20 minutes each, right? It would take me hours to draw something that looks like that. Haha. And to think that you're my age, too... I'm jealous!
Last edited by Arlequin; December 2nd, 2007 at 09:04 PM.
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that black and white isnt your best... crack the whip!
omg miles your so popular at school
Seems like you need to tidy up your shading. Try get all of the shading to follow the contours, instead of just scribbling.
Keep going with the black and white stuff, they look cooler each time.
I would suggest for you to neaten your line up too. They seem a bit too scratchy by looking at this last page.
Also, feel free to drop in my sketch book and offer me some criticism
Nice flower! I really like it. Great use of color and lightning.
About your portraits... I think you are kinda overshading them. The shadows look just as dark as his eyebrows and so your faces get kinda dark. I'd say make the dark less dark. Keep up the good work.
Fraz Cheers man, all stuff to work on.
jordyskateboardy yer i see what you mean now. Talk to you some more on MSN sometime.
This isn't very good and I'm gonna blame it on the paper which tears because the mechanical pencil is too sharp lol.
i dont think its your best b 'n' w but i really like the train jobby... coool
I agree. B&Ws look awesome if the pose is cool and has a lot of action, but there it seems a bit dull...
The train is looking kickass. I love the composition. Keep at it, cause I reckon it could come out sexually.
Nice sketchbook mate!
All critics/comments are much appriciated
#492 pose...check your light source because right now if you put your hand over the torso the legs look odd. Hard to tell which way they are turning especially the one on the left because it is almost sheer black...very nice pose though..#483 is my favorite...
My dad says... "Brilliant, love it"
Jack G Your dad sounds like quite the dude.. More geog homework...FUCK!
Rabid Peanut Yeah, thats cos I stupidly changed the lightsource half way through. Messed it up a bit.
~Maximiliaan lol thanks man.
Fraz I'm not so sure I wasn't really feeling that piece lol. Did another environment instead.
good stuff, i like that your drawing from life i think alot of people underestimate how good for you that is. Focus a little bit more on structure and line quality rather than rendering, keep up the hard work!
Woah you have bee to work here nice stuff i definatly cant post on all of these but you have some definite progress since i was gone but i think you do need to slow down a little man just eas up on the gas and invest yourself into one piece but nice stuff with the digital and your pencils are very smooth and alot neater -not to say that they dont need to be cleaned up but ya its grewat to be able to post and ill see you around keep it up
i agree that is a very good "piece". keep up the good work!
below the waist aint working xD
Sk3tcher thanks man, life drawings are pretty fun too.
Jack G lol i think i need to teach you what constructive critisism means. Is there eog homework fo' friday?
jordyskateboardy Yeah thanks man, I as pleased with that one as well
Small scale acrylic painting from phot for GCSE art. Man I wish we did figure drawing insead of an organic project. Oh well.
Man I keep getting really low ratings star wise lol.
hey man, I've been checkin time to time on your updates. Youre on the right path, just try and do some more stuff from life/reference. Just so you can memorize how light and everything works better. plains on the face and all that. BUT you already know this! SO just DO IT! I wanna see some friggin awesome shiiiiittttttt soon. Work hard-er!
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