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    What do you think of the tshirt i designed?

    Hey guys let me know what you think...

    http://www.inhabitat.com/2007/05/02/...sts/#more-4006

    its the tree/roots/lungs/heart shirt

    My concept focuses on the development of a positive attitude towards
    confronting the discouraging reality of a world where many are
    ignorant of the environmental damage. Change can only begins within
    ourselves; we are the root. I felt that the the design worked well on
    the chest as it closely resembles the arteries and veins we have under
    our skin. To look closer reveals that it is actually the roots of a
    tree!


    Inhabitat is a great site that covers green design news


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    The Good:
    The concept itself is good, but I guess you should have posted it around here sooner. ; )

    The... not so good:
    I don't want to sound too harsh, but I don't see the shape of the lung or heart in your picture,
    and given the fact that it's a vital part of your concept, that's not so good.
    I also didn't see the roots, I thought it was a tree that's upside down, because the roots and the trunk are almost similar in size.

    Me, I would have given the lung(or heart)/root analogy more emphasis, perhaps like this:
    Attachment 133295

    Good luck in the contest, though. ; )

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    i agree with SgtDirtbag,
    changing the shape to look more like lungs helps further the concept.

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    I see the lungs quite clearly actually, just no heart or tree...

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    Quote Originally Posted by Minja View Post
    I see the lungs quite clearly actually, just no heart or tree...
    Just to make things clear, this is the original done by Sultan:
    What do you think of the tshirt i designed?

    The one I posted is just a quick edit I did to show him how to push the concept further.

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    ohhhhhh haha, good call. I didn't read very in depth there.

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