Hi everyone. Its been a while since I posted. Been tooo busy with Uni work. But I've got the nod to post some work I've done for Red Mist Castle. They're all fantasy based, which isn't exactly my top genre, but its all about variety
Hope you like
Last edited by Kian; April 30th, 2007 at 10:58 AM.
http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/3205/qendlb0.jpg my favorite
nice work man
Once again congrats on the new postition.
Nice work here, my favs are 1, 5 and 6. The atmosphere on them is excellent. I think that you are stuggling with some perspective issues on a couple of the images especially 8 and 9. On both the right sides of the buildings have been brought up to far to fit into the 3 point perspective.
Sorry I can't describe it better.
Nice work, good to see youve been keeping busy.
some great stuff!
the one im having some problems with is that blue image near the bottom... with all the stuff glowing, i cant really make out the shapes, i cant tell what the material is on some of the objects either, it just confuses me.
very cool man, keep going
Jon, those are sick!! That firest image is my favorite, great sense of depth.
Keep it up, bro!!
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Niiiice stuff, man. I like 2, 6, 8, 9 and 11. 2 is stunning and the composition in both 8 and 9 make them look really cool, hehe. 6, 9 and 11 look epic. Really like the use of texture throughout and the sense of depth portrayed.
I think some of the buildings/monuments like in piece 3 could do with more detail or be more elaborate. Stuff in Fantasy tends to be a bit OTT, afterall, but if this isn't what the client wanted then coo'...
Nice to see ya around
Seriously nice atmosphere - I saved them all to have as inspiration, the day when I decide to practise my enviro skills... those none-existant ones. Thanks for showing!
nice enviros Jon - it's great to see you continually evolve your work! Your way ahead of where you were just a couple years ago.
Very cool enviros dude, I absolutely love that there is a prevalent mood in all of them, like each can belong to it own movie. Think some of them might do well with some figures/characters. It give a better sense of scales and can bring more life/energy into the environment.
Great work, have some stars dude.
Alrighty Jon, kicking ass like usual!
Keep up the great work,
stay well bro.
the paints are beautiful with great colours and compositions.
a minor crit - i think in this one the piers work against you in suggesting depth. i'd put them a bit closer together as they get farther away from us..
the atmosphere is really strong in all of these - love the one with the rain in it.
check the Tensai Tokyo Sketch Thread (Sketchbook)
check the Tensai Cityscapes Thread (Finally Finished)
Originally Posted by strych9ine
Oooo, look at you with yer 5 stars and whatnot. Nice work mate, especially that Helm's Deepy piece. Iz Nice!
Like them all but som some feel abit cropped, Like this one, http://img339.imageshack.us/img339/3205/qendlb0.jpg it's good but it would work even better for me if I saw more of the 'plates' to the left and right.
Hey Jon! These are awesome, thanks for posting!
Keep at it hun, Mx
Hi all, Thanks Fixed that top image now.
I think the last two guys who voted killed my 5 stars but oh well
jdeegz: Thanks mate
adam: Cheers mate. I know exactly what ya mean
ICH: Thankyou! I appreiciate it
Davi: Thanks mate. Yeah i agree, they're supposed to be glowing crystals
12Monkeys: Many thanks
Danny: Many thanks brother. Glad you like
Loren: Thankyou my friend.
Naaaoooomiiiiiiiii: ta naomi!! I agree, this i think is a clear example of me having to re-adjust to fantasy style architecture. Struggled with it a bit here.
DragonSnail: Cheers mate
Daryl: Hi Daryl Thanks for the post man. I'm glad you like these
Brendan: Thanks mate, means alot. I always try to get as much atmosphere in as possible.
Dile: Hiya bro. Many many thanks dude. I appreciate it.
Mick: Hey mate. glad you like em.
Tensai: Hey man! thanks! I totally agree with you on that piece. It's defo the weakest one imo
Pat: Mate, I'm happy as hell you like em
Pete: Hey mate I'm sorry, its seems I've let ya down as I've been demoted disgracefully to 4 stars! lol. Its all good. I'll just have to try harder next time.
Wasker: thanks man. Yeah i get what ya mean. Its a good point.
Molly: Hiya Molly! thanks for the post I'll defo keep at it
Beautiful work. 3, 5 and 7 are my favorites. Great atmosphere and on #5, I love the forced entrance into the main gate. Awesome way to funnel enemies into a kill zone.
Fourth Nail: Many thanks mate
Viag: Hey mate! I'm glad you popped by. I think youre totally right. I'll remember that for next time.
Daniel C: Cheers bro
Ryan: Massiv thanks matey. Again, soz i was on the phone, i will defo give your SB a crit next time im on msn.
SpaceSprayer: Hiya mate. I'm in paddock in a student house at the mo. I'm doing a transport design at the uni
Chupacabra: Hey mate. I think thats very true man. the environment thread really helped me improve alot too!
Damn hot, Jon, damn hot!!!!
The moods on these are to die for.
Just asspats and stars for ya