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    nates photos-Crit me hard,,, july 2nd

    hey guys havn't been around for ages, volleyball has kind of taken over my life for the moment.
    currently I am shooting with my stock 18-55m and a sigma 70-210mm 4.5f
    I am looking at getting a prime 50mm and a 23mm 2.3f
    I have also talked to some local skaters I have permission to shoot so I am going to try my hand at that.
    here are some pics that I have taken lately that I have been satisfied with. C&C appreciated
    thanks for looking
    I will first start with some shots from my SW reef tank and its corals
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    anthelia with actinic lighting
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    anthelia without actinic lighting
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    now some pics I took while walking around the city one day
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    thanks for looking
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    Yay, I look forward to skate photos one thing puzzles me though: You have to ask the skaters for permission? I have them asking me to take them.

    Your photos are showing a good variety, although I prefer some of your earlier work. I think the first one needs the focus point moved closer towards the lens, but apart from that I have no real crits.
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    Quote Originally Posted by klips
    Yay, I look forward to skate photos one thing puzzles me though: You have to ask the skaters for permission? I have them asking me to take them.

    Your photos are showing a good variety, although I prefer some of your earlier work. I think the first one needs the focus point moved closer towards the lens, but apart from that I have no real crits.
    the first pic, I was holding a set of 49mm close up filters to my 52mm lense, so I was having a hard time working the focus, I will go back and try to move the focus towards the viewer.
    well it was more asking them if it bothered them that I shot them, small town people are kind of weird, although they are already planning some crazy stuff to show me.

    I took this last batch to see if I could shoot that style, it was interesting people looked at me funny when I was taking photos of buildings and stuff, some people asked for there photos to be taken, it was pretty fun. I may do it again sometime this spring.
    I will also look for some skaters in the cities parks see what I can get there.
    thanks for the crits klips
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    Very good composition also in the architeture spacing, very nice
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    well here are 2 from the other day, I am going to take the bike and ride into the country hopefully I will have some more pics to show this evening.
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    here are the pics from the bike ride, and 2 pics from my reef tank.

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    and here are 2 coral pics
    Green star polyps
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    Anthelia.
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    sorry if the pics are dark I edited them on a different computer, and the monitor seems to be out of wack on it
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    well I took some pics this afternoon, and the more this evening when I got my new coral.

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    here are the pics of the coral, I used 2 sets of 49mm macro filters held in front of my 52mm lense, I will be looking for 52mm filters soon.
    red mushroom coral.
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    this is an edge of a green open brain coral
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    I took a long bike ride into the country found an old road that hasn't been used in ages so here are some pics.
    I still have to go back and check out an old barn I found.
    the macro of the lock where taken using my 49mm filters again
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    Very nice composition in #26.

    I like #28, but I think you should try to play around with more shots like that. Experimentation please... =)

    #29 is amazing in the fact that the nasty berries break up the composition so well.
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    cheers on #4, like the srtong design element
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    thanks rose and eazym

    I spent my day in the city today, just walking around taking pics, I bought a new lense a 28mm 3.5f with polarizing filter, about 90% of these where taken with it.
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    Wow, you're a busy photographer.


    I like the macro shots of petals and leaves as well the one of the lock as you get very clear subject matters then while taking the overall image into the realm of the abstract - a contrast I really like about photography.

    #10b, the house in the blue reflection is a wonderfully soothing image to look at. I am looking forward to future experimentations with reflections in your thread as you seem to have an liking for them.

    13b looks like a theater stage prop. I feel like leaning back and letting the actors flood the stage, sort of. Really nice.
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    thanks Mr Mu.
    I figure the more shots I shoot the better I will get hopefully.
    I am going to keep workig with macro shots, I am looking for some more interesting subjects around me.
    I will also be going back to those buildings and trying to get some more reflection shots.
    13b is a view across the river, lots of fun going down the trails there and shooting.
    well hopefully I will have some more pretty soon here
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