Hi, I'm usually a lurker around here and I just decided to unlurk myself.
The attached image is something I had to do in my life drawing class. The assignment was to draw 3 things a day. Although I only have one scanned here because it's the one I seem to focus on the most.
I asked my instructor for an honest critique and made a few changes according to them (mostly about the width of the body vs. height of the head) and while she says my detail on the hands are good, I personally thought they want my death.
I was trying to go for a realistic look but I guess I'm going to have to settle with semi-realistic. And if it matters, I had to do this by memory and guessing since I didn't have a reference in hand.
So redlining or any advice on what I should do to fix this is greatly appreciated. I'm thinking of CGing it afterwards.
And I'm not sure if this belongs here because this isn't entirely a doodle or work in progress as I don't know where to go from here.