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    Need Help, Tons! Please!

    I tried posting this in the Critque area but didn't get much response. Please help me out, I really want to make this a good piece.
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    And where I am now

    I started coloring...Comments?

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    the possitioning of the legs is very odd
    ask yourself how you would jump
    would you cross your legs after takeing off?
    and how do you intend to land?
    colouring looks fine so far

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    Not a bad start. I think the pose could be way more dynamic. Try letting the arms point more outwards and be more stretched out so you can clearly see his face. Something with the legs is bothering me. I think someone jumping like that wouldn't hold his legs that stiff. Also let his clothes be affected more by the movement. The coloring is looking good but your not squeezing everything out of this piece yet. Oh and a background would add alot ofcourse. I hope this helped you a bit and I'll be looking forward to an updated version.

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