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    mark sketchbook-critique--critique

    im onli 15 but tryin to improve leaps and bounds. plz critique as much as possible
    my mum's critique is just not up to scratch

    this is less a sketchbook but an exibition of recent work but sketch book is comin... bare with me plz

    thnx in advance

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    some more stuff for u guys to rate and critique
    these are anatomy but the first is terrible quality

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    Hey man, whats up. Your works are good, but you still need some anatomy study. Keep it up

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    Please resize these a bit? And crop out empty canvas from the sides...
    Hard to see the drawings completely without scrolling right now, so it's hard to give critique!

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    You are on your way to learning anatomy, and the sooner one start learning, the sooner one can get a hang on it. Nice! But like dmitri here said; resize the images. If you do, it will be much easier for us to see them clearly, and thus easier to give good critiques.

    Keep updating!

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    As said before, resize.

    The first study of the the ermm... whats it called painting *feels embarrassed for not knowing* is great!
    I've never seen a 15 year old with the skill - or maturity - to attempt such subject matter.

    More of that stuff I say. Keep it up and you'll be well on your way.

    P.S. With your digital work, stay away from the soft brushes. Use a hard edge brush. It makes everything easier to see. For you and the viewer.

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    kromnz-cool thnx

    dimitri-thnx i will resize, didn't know it would turn out like that, my first time uploading.

    janeM-thnx, and i agree its good to start early.
    p.s. seen and love your work

    hunterkiller-thnx alot, but about the soft brushes, i just love using them feels intuitive.

    i will look at all ur sketchbooks

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    i have decide to repost everythin resized except for the chimp,so they can be more efficently critique.

    thnx in advanced

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    o gosh some of these are awfully pixilated plz try and ignore

    thnx

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    some sketches i did at the national art gallery, most have wings because it is for my exam which i finished last week.

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    o yeah the angel guy with the halo dont on painter 10 was also used for my exam

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    I don't want to be impolite, but could you make the images a bit smaller again?
    It's not that easy to get a good view on them, and so to give you a good comment, when they are so big ^^" .

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