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    Exclamation URGENT!! In need of crits/suggestions! Deadline fast approaching!!! (28th March!)


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    Last edited by Chermilla; March 26th, 2007 at 12:21 PM.

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    Hmm, i think for some manga-influenced character, her legs are a bit too short. The rest looks good.

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    Some of the spaces look a little flat. For example, the pink pillow on the left hand side in the middle. The shine looks nice and satiny, but there it falls behind the rest of the pillows its just a flat color. Maybe do a bit of shading, cast shadow, or even a bit of reflective color (since it satiny, it should do a little of that).

    Look carefully at the shadows in general. Adding a lot of them won't help much, since it looks like its supposed to be a bright happy image before you notice the poor leached critter But the shadows around her tail look a bit off, the puff she's on should be casting a shadow as well, the wall would probably have some shadows around the curtains and would probably get darker as it goes down by the right hand side. Try to keep the same value of the darkest dark in the shadows (the space between her feet looks great, as does the darkest spots in her hair, try to make the rest of the shadows reach the same richness).

    Also maybe work on smoothing out her skin some. The fur and hair has lovely texture to it, but the skin maybe shouldn't have as much.

    On the other hand, you've done a lovely job relaying the fabric throughout the image; the lights are perfect on the fabrics, the puffs look fluffy, the teady bear is so fuzzy you can't even see his edges! Now that is soft. The hair, especially the highlights, is lovely and smooth. Keep up the good work on your lighting!

    Good luck on getting it finished! Post the completed one once your done?

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