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    Major motoko kusanagi

    had this idea in my head tonight so i sat down and started, i still need to work on the details and the rain is only a stand in layer etc but i hope the idea comes across ok

    thanks for taking the time to look

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    Major motoko kusanagi
    Some parts of this pose doesn't feel as dynamic as I thought it could be. Maybe you can tweak the pose and perspective just a little. I am not so sure about her proper left arms (our right). The whole body looks a little short for some reason.

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    i made some changes here and there, most of it is on one layer so i kepth the changes simple but workable.

    anyway here is where i am after spending some more time on it and changing a few things

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    She seems a bit androgynous.

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    To me, on the other hand, she doesn't seem androgynous at all. Her right (from us) breast however, seems to be a touch differently proportioned than the other one? Or then I just can't see it right.

    The latter version seems definitely more balanced than the first one.

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    Her left boob needs to grow and drop down a fraction to the left.

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    this is a great piece.. i like the view angle and the whole scene in general. good progress so far.. definitely fix up the anatomy, things get awkward in a view like this but it'll ruin it if its incorrect.

    i guess shes in some building encased in glass.. but it seems kinda boring in there. work up the enviro a bit more.. - JAG

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    I think he wanted to picture more of a scene after all the action, with the shot out windows, her more like feeling the peace after all that action.. immersing herself in the rain.

    but he could put some plants in the background.. since it looks like some sort of greenhouse

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    thanks everyone

    evil , yup but as you can see i want to have a broken mech in the bg , given the angle i think only the legs of a fuchikoma and some broken parts would be seen.

    JAG.

    spot on and im still working on it as it is but its getting there i want this to work well so im giving it the time

    tonyhough

    thanks for taking the time to comment , and yeah your right

    Fhiserya

    nope your right,

    ArtZealot

    i think its the body suit thats throwing you since it make the body a bit shaped i guess , still it needs to have the decals put in but thats not till i have the feature in first

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    Work on her face - she doesn't look like Kusanagi ...
    and your glass "effect" is poor

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    Very nice! Few crits though:

    - Her left (our right) breast seems to be a bit too close to the center of her chest and is too small compared to the other.
    - Her nipples should be a bit higher since we are looking at the bottoms of hear breasts.
    - I'd get rid of the tech stuff in the last one. Or at least make it stand out a bit less and use the blue/red from the surroundings
    - Feitian's shoulder looks better, although it is a bit overdone. Somewhere in between would be more subtle and do the job.

    Keep up the good work! Love it!

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