Page 1 of 3 1 2 3 LastLast
Results 1 to 30 of 80
  1. #1
    Join Date
    Sep 2002
    Location
    Germany
    Posts
    209
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    Hermchens sketchbook

    I want my own sketchbook. So here I start...

    C&C are are most welcome!

    My first four pages...

    Some with foto ref. some outa me mind.


    [page 1]
    Hermchens sketchbook


    [page 2]
    Hermchens sketchbook


    [page 3]
    Hermchens sketchbook


    [page 4]
    Hermchens sketchbook
    Last edited by Hermchen; July 20th, 2003 at 12:40 PM.


  2. Hide this ad by registering as a member
  3. #2
    Join Date
    Sep 2002
    Location
    Germany
    Posts
    209
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    page 5 to 7


    [page 5]
    Hermchens sketchbook


    [page 6]
    Hermchens sketchbook


    [page 7]
    Hermchens sketchbook
    Last edited by Hermchen; July 20th, 2003 at 12:39 PM.

  4. #3
    Join Date
    Jun 2003
    Location
    Minnesota
    Posts
    256
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    These are great, I really can't see anything wrong with them. so Im sorry I can't give to much crit.

    Sehr gut.

  5. #4
    Join Date
    Nov 2002
    Location
    Maryland, USA
    Posts
    229
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    Nice figures,your shading is very effective! Post more

  6. #5
    Join Date
    Jul 2002
    Location
    Ruhrgebiet, Germany
    Posts
    1,644
    Thanks
    4
    Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts
    Hi Hermchen, long time no see!

    Good to have you filling your own sketchbook, too!

    Great stuff BTW!

    Jester
    Imagination is intelligence having fun!

    Jester's Sketchbook

    Portfolio web site

  7. #6
    Join Date
    Sep 2002
    Location
    Germany
    Posts
    209
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    Thank you for the comments!

    I was hoping you could give me some real criticism, too

    @Jester It's true, I didn't attend Concepart.org for some time or not frequently enough. That is because of some new things in my life I am getting used to. I worked at a small design company as a trainee. In Sebtember I'll start studying design in Cologne at it's university of applied science. I'm really looking forward to that! But soon I'll have some holidays, all arranged for drawing BTW, what the heck is the Middle Class? How can I become a member?

    Now here comes the next page. The woman on the left and the man on the top are drawn from real life within 5 minutes at a railway station. The athlete is drawn with fotoref.. Took about 13 minutes.
    [page 8]
    Hermchens sketchbook

  8. #7
    Join Date
    Jul 2002
    Location
    Ruhrgebiet, Germany
    Posts
    1,644
    Thanks
    4
    Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts
    Hi Hermchen,

    hmnmmn real criticism? Difficult! Your pics are really good IMO. Therefore you should try to get on to the next level and start "real pictures", i.e. with a topic/theme, fore- middle and background. You do the same as I in just putting on paper what interests your eye and mind but a concept artist should be able to create whole scenes, environments and so on.

    You could also try color (oil, acrylics, watercolor...).

    The middle class was brought to life by I.was.ink, MindCandyman and myself some time in January/February. We were annoyed that we were neither noobs nor pros and wanted to get assignments from the pros. Which we didn't get, naturally. So we decided to form a middle class and give the tasks and crits to ourselves.

    Anybody who seriously wants to learn to draw is welcome. We only ask for persistency and giving constructive crits. Just check out the Middle Class sub-thread - it's all in there (Lots to read...)

    My congrats to you being accepted by the FH Cologne! This was my dream 20 years ago... what the hell, I did something different, earned quite a lot of money and have my own one-woman-company now (why cry over spilled milk?) But I love drawing in my spare time and I am very happy that I really improved over the past 3 years - much because of CA!

    Carry on!

    Jester
    Imagination is intelligence having fun!

    Jester's Sketchbook

    Portfolio web site

  9. #8
    Join Date
    Sep 2002
    Location
    Germany
    Posts
    209
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    @Jester Thank you Jester. Nice reply. I will certainly check the middle class thread. Perhaps I want to join you. We'll see. What kind of one-woman-company is that you have, if it's not too personal?

    Here is page 9 - page 11, all from life



    [page 9]
    Hermchens sketchbook

    [page 10]
    Hermchens sketchbook

    [page 11]
    Hermchens sketchbook

  10. #9
    Join Date
    Jul 2002
    Location
    Ruhrgebiet, Germany
    Posts
    1,644
    Thanks
    4
    Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts
    Hi Hermchen, no, it's not too personal. I'm a marketing consulter for small and medium enterprises (SME, in Germany called KMU). In case you are interested or know someone who needs professional external marketing services, go to Rat & Tat Marketing. This is shameless selfmarketing, too

    Great life studies. I'll stop working in about half an hour and do some drawings, too!

    Have a nice weekend.

    Jester
    Imagination is intelligence having fun!

    Jester's Sketchbook

    Portfolio web site

  11. #10
    Join Date
    Sep 2002
    Location
    Germany
    Posts
    209
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    no ref.

    [page 12]
    Hermchens sketchbook

    [page 13]
    Hermchens sketchbook

    [page 14]
    Hermchens sketchbook
    Last edited by Hermchen; July 29th, 2003 at 05:01 PM.

  12. #11
    Join Date
    Sep 2002
    Location
    Germany
    Posts
    209
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    This guy is an archer who lives near by the sea. Mainly on the shore. His armor is mostly out of shells. He can hide his head in the breast plate like a turtle, still able to fire arrows.

    [page 15]
    Hermchens sketchbook

    [page 16]
    Hermchens sketchbook
    Last edited by Hermchen; July 30th, 2003 at 07:53 AM.

  13. #12
    Join Date
    Sep 2002
    Location
    Germany
    Posts
    209
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    [page 17]
    Hermchens sketchbook

    [page 18]
    Hermchens sketchbook

  14. #13
    Join Date
    Jul 2003
    Location
    Sarasota, Florida
    Posts
    14
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

    thoughts

    nice sketches. i have the hardest time sketching from photos. i would recommend 2 things.

    use the side of your pencil to shade in value, not just a little of the tip or the point, use the whole thing and drag it around to create broader, richer vlaues. good value will carry a sketch farther than good line work.

    also your line work is nice, interesting and varied. but i would suggest using it more to define form than to outline things, use it more sparingly to define where things overlap, change direction, etc not merely to contain the shading.

    a teacher of mine had us draw only with value for a whole semester. no line. it was hard as shit but eventually it worked and much more convincingly and faster than starting with lots of lines.

    i use lines to come up with concepts, but value for life drawing.
    Erik Hageman

    Being with those kids gives me a high only morphine can top! -HS

    www.DigitalAbsinthe.com

  15. #14
    Join Date
    Jul 2002
    Location
    Ruhrgebiet, Germany
    Posts
    1,644
    Thanks
    4
    Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts
    Erik, Hermchen's Style of shading is similar to what is usually taught in Germany. I found that many teachers asked me not to do values with the side of the pencil as described by you. Don't ask me why, though, when I see Kevin Cheng's class demos I can't see what should be wrong with using that method. Probably it's just a very "academic" point of view. I like using that method, too, because it's fast and comes quite naturally. Hmm, I should stop ranting...

    Jester
    Imagination is intelligence having fun!

    Jester's Sketchbook

    Portfolio web site

  16. #15
    Join Date
    Aug 2002
    Location
    Irvine, CA
    Posts
    1,637
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 40 Times in 8 Posts
    hermy:
    you know you are insane. what are you sketching for? practice is for mortals.
    :p

  17. #16
    Join Date
    Sep 2002
    Location
    Germany
    Posts
    209
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    @killing.people: Uh, ah. Thanks for the flattering! I'm not insane. I'm just trying to use the time sitting in a train or at a station for art. OK, I could imagine really brave concepts within this times, but that is something I have to work on: beeing brave. Sketching people or stones or whatever shows me, that everything is possible, and that there are millions of shapes that haven't been drawn at all. Once I thought, that it could be possible to know all the human architechture and from that, create every human I could imagine, then I found myself drawing stereotypes because I wasn't brave enough to imagine.

    @Erik Hageman and Jester: I know about all this, and you can belive me when I say, I see in values and their forms, overlaps and I try to develope my sight for planes.
    I mostly start laying down the values, but I know about my problem with outlines. I will practice using them more wisely.
    Most of the sketches are done within 10 minutes or less, so I don't care if they are that rich of values. Look at Kevin Cheng's class demos and you will see, that 4 values can take a sketch far enough for it beeing a sketch.
    Once someone on this board told me my style (he referred to a self portrait) was very german and I couldn't find out why. Now I think I know why -> because of the lines!?! It's true that my teachers said, use a sharp pencil's tip and don't smudge! They told me otherwise the drawing would look dirty. I don't smudge, but when I use the side of the pencil sometimes it becomes like smudging and the image does look dirty. So I think every kind of technique can be used, if it's used wisely and with the knowlegde of where it will lead you.

  18. #17
    Join Date
    Jul 2003
    Location
    Richmond, Va
    Posts
    95
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    i like the sea archer design. nice original idea
    Draw not to impress. Draw to improve.


  19. #18
    Join Date
    Sep 2002
    Location
    Germany
    Posts
    209
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    @killing.people: I thought again about what you wrote. You really made me wake up a bit. I mean on the one hand it could have been just flattering, but on the other hand why should you flatter me? It made me gain selfconfidence, really. And thats why I tried for a more finished kind of art at the Magic Cards Redesign thread.
    Finally, I want to say thank you. I appreciate. :waves:

  20. #19
    Join Date
    Sep 2002
    Location
    Germany
    Posts
    209
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    Another page. Hallelujah...

    [page 19]
    Hermchens sketchbook

  21. #20
    Join Date
    Apr 2003
    Location
    Canada, Ontario
    Posts
    2,364
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post
    welcome to the daily sketch crew. you surpass me and i really like your imagination. any artist cant go without it !!

  22. #21
    Join Date
    Apr 2003
    Location
    Canada, Ontario
    Posts
    2,364
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post
    i like all of these and especially the first one its great gJ!

  23. #22
    Join Date
    Feb 2003
    Location
    Los Angeles, CA
    Posts
    213
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    wow, very imaginative creatures there! I love the depth in the first piece... nice job!

  24. #23
    Join Date
    Sep 2002
    Location
    Germany
    Posts
    209
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    Thanx guys.

    Hermchens sketchbook

    Hermchens sketchbook
    Last edited by Hermchen; August 26th, 2003 at 04:28 PM.

  25. #24
    Join Date
    Sep 2002
    Location
    Germany
    Posts
    209
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

  26. #25
    Join Date
    Sep 2002
    Location
    Germany
    Posts
    209
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

  27. #26
    Join Date
    Jul 2002
    Location
    Ruhrgebiet, Germany
    Posts
    1,644
    Thanks
    4
    Thanked 2 Times in 2 Posts
    Hermchen, that monster looks great! Righ-click-safe-to-disk

    Jester
    Imagination is intelligence having fun!

    Jester's Sketchbook

    Portfolio web site

  28. #27
    Join Date
    Sep 2002
    Location
    Germany
    Posts
    209
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

  29. #28
    Join Date
    Dec 2002
    Location
    Remscheid / Germany
    Posts
    427
    Thanks
    2
    Thanked 20 Times in 16 Posts
    The last two monsters are REALLY GOOD! Wow!:thumb:

  30. #29
    Join Date
    Sep 2002
    Location
    Germany
    Posts
    209
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts

  31. #30
    Join Date
    Sep 2002
    Location
    Castrop-Rauxel, Germany
    Posts
    1,133
    Thanks
    30
    Thanked 15 Times in 11 Posts
    The last one - the gnome with the sword - is really great. It shows you´re developing a unique style. Keep on with the good work!

    Fipse
    <Insert witty remark here>

Page 1 of 3 1 2 3 LastLast

Similar Threads

  1. SketchBook: Sketchbook, Sketchbook, Rolly Polly Sketchbook...
    By Teechan in forum Sketchbooks
    Replies: 5
    Last Post: August 17th, 2015, 05:41 PM
  2. Replies: 23
    Last Post: January 19th, 2013, 03:19 PM
  3. Replies: 12
    Last Post: August 27th, 2009, 11:38 AM
  4. SketchBook: Unknown Epiphany's Sketchbook/brand new sketchbook(Updated February 27th)
    By unknown_epiphany in forum Sketchbooks
    Replies: 195
    Last Post: February 27th, 2007, 10:43 PM

Members who have read this thread: 0

There are no members to list at the moment.

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •  

Developed Actively by the makers of the Best Amazon Podcast