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    A Fight.

    Hi.

    This is my first post here, I came here a while ago and I've been absolutely floored by the level of work that goes on and is considered oridinary in these forums. I'm not an accomplished visual artist, and I would love any crits and comments you all have.

    This sketch is of a fight I saw on st. patty's day. both guys took off their shirts and one promptly knocked the crap out of the other in one blow.

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    So this looks like a comicbook fight. but it also looks like he misses. The
    hitters elbow is past the other guys nek and the angle is slightly off. Also
    the hitter looks smaller in propotions and because of that look further away.
    That might also be because the knocked guy's head is a bit big in
    propotions to the hitters. Try to sharpen some lines and shading them in manners that dont make te drawing flat, try and clean up your lines. I like the Idé of a st. patty's day fight.

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