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    character concept painting... come in and crit!

    latest personal character concept,, and my strongest piece (i think). Havent add any background yet,,(will do)
    There's always room for improvements so critique!!!!!

    Please dont reply unless u have any construcitve to say,,, and i'll really appreciate it!


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    As a pic its nice but as a concept have you done the feet? and the head would need to have its space defined as I cant really see it?

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    i suck at feet so I decided on this one i only design from the knee up,,, yeah,, bad me..

    the head = I like it best without a define face.

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    hehe thats fair enough. I made a point of having a look at your book aswell and its all ery nice and your previous works show a strong translation from drawing to colour, but on this one the hand looks nicer on the concept and the stomace cuts in on the original and a final thing is the little holes on the sholeders looked nice on the drawing aswell.

    I suppose it depends what your after, as a pic its very nice but if you want it as a direct translation of your ref then it will need a little tweeking and the legs done if it was to be made into a 3-D game model ?

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    thanks for the sugg man, it's been a while since I do any personal concept,, just wanna do one for fun and improvements. I wasnt really going for the exact translation from the drawing to the painting. It was more like painting as it goes.

    and there wont be any 3d modeling to it.

    this is all the crit I get from people in here? I know there's gotta be someone to point out more things that i can do to improve this

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