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    Pencil Drawing

    This is a pencil drawing i did a few weeks ago. I used Photoshop to brighten it a bit, because the original was very hard to see. If its too bright i will post the original too. Any crits would be very welcome!
    Last edited by Loading...; March 13th, 2007 at 01:28 PM.

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    Interesting idea.

    Major area to improve on: anatomy. Male's left hand is huge compared to his right. Female's right upper arm is tiny compared to her left arm.

    Watch out for image "noise" when you resize or save your file for the web. Not a good thing to see.

    Are those hills in the background? What are those creatures in the back? If they're hard to see, other viewers might wonder what those are as well and get distracted by them instead of dwelling on your main subjects.

    Maybe make the male angel's wings more ROBUST, HUGE, manlier....

    Wait is he attempting to grab the fallen angel's crotch area? My word! And she's stopping him. Good job!

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