Crit a sketch b4 i start painting
Join the #1 Art Workshop - LevelUpJoin Premium Art Workshop

Results 1 to 2 of 2

Thread: Crit a sketch b4 i start painting

  1. #1
    Join Date
    Mar 2007
    Posts
    24
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0

    Crit a sketch b4 i start painting

    i did a sketich in class that i kinda like and i want to go further with it. i like the arms and head position but i should change the legs and maybe torso...
    please share your thoughts / tips on how i should fix it up before i take it to photoshop... it's the 1st drawing on my blog
    http://ogig.blogspot.com
    thank you for taking time to help out

    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

  2. #2
    Join Date
    May 2004
    Location
    Poland, Cracov
    Posts
    80
    Thanks
    0
    Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts
    Follows
    0
    Following
    0
    First of all you got some grat pieces on your blog, but you got this unevnes, some are really gorgeous and some far away forom that.

    You have a lot fotorealistic drawnings, so the first thing that stikes me are anatomy issues and stiffnes of the pose, maybe you shoud rethink the body movement that occurs during this "ground smash", the pose dont give justice to the presumable power of the move.

    A boxer thorwing a punch twists his upper body to give a hard blow cos the energy comes from the twist and the shoulder than the arm itslef, when you woud watch the Rocky series ( cos its overdrawn in the power of the moves) you can see that, so it woud be something like that.

    You got a 3 years professional scholl education for now in that so i'm the last person to give you advices but i hope that this will help.

    One Party, One Leader, One Voice !!! We give you a choice - if you dont agree we propose you execution at sight.
    Reply With Quote Reply With Quote  

Members who have read this thread: 0

There are no members to list at the moment.

Bookmarks

Posting Permissions

  • You may not post new threads
  • You may not post replies
  • You may not post attachments
  • You may not edit your posts
  •