paperX Haha, finally is right, yeah.
Hey man, thanks for the critique. I totally didn't see that in my pencil sketch, and it just became really obvious when I shaded. I think having her torso so dark in contrast with her legs doesn't help it either. It kind of makes it obvious they're too short. I feel lame having anatomy problems on a finished work like this. Haha...well..next time.
Here's the more I promised earlier.
Here you'll see my teen challenge lineart..which I kind of like more in some parts than the finished work.
Then some concepts for the teen challenge.
Then a half finished painty doodle.
Then a CHoW that I never did anything with.
Then a portraity drawing of an elf, which I did after I was inspired by watching an Iain McCaig drawing dvd...wow.
And then another half finished painty doodle. With underwear.
Last edited by sketcheth; March 7th, 2007 at 12:08 AM.
I was gonna mention the knees on your TC piece, but PaperX beat me to the punch by about 20 hours. But another thing I noticed (minor, by comparison) is the that the face seems to be lit more from the top than the top-right, like the neck (which you lit awesome-ly). Also, it seems a lot of your TC concepts have the same "gravi-knee" (just made that up ) issue as your final painting. Your underpants sketch seems to have much, much less of that problem, but maybe I'm just being picky because I've got it on my brain.
paperX Dude, I loved your thumbnails! The oc will be good times. mc2mc2 Yup. I'll definitely watch the knees from now on. Can't wait to oc some! Q-Caddlewick There was a lot of thinking going on...I still think I could've taken the design further, but I'm fairly pleased as is. chumble spuzz Knees! And you know, I can totally see that in a lot of my work. Looks like I'll be doing some Bridgman leg studies. Thanks for the critique, man. Nothing wrong with a friendly reminder. Envisor I wouldn't consider myself really a fantasy artist, but I do love drawing elves. bunny You like them? Thanks, I appreciate the support! zao75231 Thanks! I intend on doing just that.
Just pencils for today. A sketchbook page, and a banana study for drawing II. Maybe more a little later if I finish anything!