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Hi! I need some criticism. What is wrong in your opinion?
This shows the deadly future race where is one rule- there is no rule This is not an ilustration- this is only fast-painted sketch.
The white smoke coming from the jet propellor thing seems a little too even in my opinion. The black smoke that's being projected into the sky is a little soft - try adding a hint of an object at the head of the smoke since smoke can't just randomly go off like that.
Bring in more focus of the leading edges in the foreground gradually soften the edges in degress on all objects towards the background and pull your directional speed lines to the back in one direction.
It is very good but it just needs one direction to indicate speed if that is what your looking for