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    my first website

    hello all.
    This place has flourished with so many amazing people since i have joined. Its very intimidating to post. ha!

    www.haldeen.com

    I am focusing more on a motion graphics career lately... but there are still some drawings and boards up there and i would love all of your opinions.

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I am really sorry to tell you that i pressed CTRL+W as soon as it was finished loading. The colours if not everything was not very pleasent to look at.. The red/vs/blue tortured my eyes literally.

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    thank you for taking time to look at my work and
    really thank you for your constructive criticisim.
    Last edited by TIM; March 4th, 2007 at 02:34 PM.

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    I am really impressed by your traditional work. You've got some very good pieces there and I like the way they are presented, too. The style just doesn't really match with the colorful banner in my eyes -the colors of the banner are too bright and "agressive" for my taste. Still - even though you can definatley improve the layout of the site, I really enjoyed your traditional work and the sketchbook section a lot.
    "The reason why truth is so much stranger than fiction is that there is no requirement for it to be consistent."-Mark Twain

    gone.

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    too many clicks to get to the candy for me......

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    Well I might have slated you for your site design skills if I hadn't completely fallen in love with some of your traditional drawings.

    Some really great stuff; and the saving grace of the site is that you didn't make the mistake some illustrators do of over-designing the web page when all people really want to look at is your work.

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    site design

    Thank you everyone for taking the time to look through my site and drawings.
    The sites colors are actually the broadcast color bars you may have seen on TV when "this is only a test" (i thought it might be clever since i am in broadcast). But obviously these colours are hurting fellow orgers. ha! Everything else will be taken into consideration.. but not taken care of immediatley.....so very tierd of working on the site.
    Seriously thank you for even going and clicking around.... this is concept art .org not my first site .org.

    ~t

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    As has been said, while some of the work is quite nice, that openining screen is one of the most hideous things I've ever seen. Also, your design link is empty, but maybe that's not such a bad thing .
    Finally, put a sample pic in that first post or I'll have to move this. Not only is it the rule for this section, but people are far more likely to click through if they have some idea of what they're going to get.

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