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    Smile Birth of Venus - Masterpiece copying

    This is my first work on the computer - haven't really done it yet, hoppefully I will get more time for it. The lower one was the original work (from cgsociety) of a French artist (I for got his name). Any critique is welcome because I need to find out more problems before I continue.
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    Right now all your values are really washed out because you're painting on pure white. Get the background colors indicated before you go any further. You'll find it much easier to judge the colors of the figure if they're in the right context from the beginning.

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    I think that for a beginer you have a very good results.the hair is done very
    masterfully but i think you should work a bit more on the contrast of light and
    shadows.it seems a litle pale and bloodless.work it out!
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