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    arriving

    arriving to my college.........100 years later.
    criticts and comments are welcome

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    This is pretty cool. I think the composition could be bigger though. Show how high the buildings are and what's around it.

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    oh, is a compo for a magazine,, that´s the reason why i use that format.

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    Hi,

    I think the background is working really well. At the moment though the streets look a little quiet and the ship seems out of proportion. I would lay a perspective grid over the image and just have a quick look to see how far out you are. It doesn't mean you can't bend the rules, but at the moment it stands out a little. As I said thought the buildings and atmosphere are looking great.

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    looks cool, my only comment is that the green colour used on the incoming ship stands out a little too much compared to the colour scheme of the rest of the image...doenst seem to "fit" very well... the fg seems to slant a bit too?? otherwise great work, I dig it!

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    Sweet. The only crit from me is the ground underneath the ship, it's kind of simple. I think if you would add just some other elements it would be really cool.
    Love it,

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