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    Trying to create new worlds - Help & Crits needed.

    First time I ever posted, the second image I uploaded for the EOW #45 "Alien Music Store".

    Please critizice.

    Thanks for your help.
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    its amazing how sublte value touches can add so much. 2nd one looks promising. im sure youll have some fun bringing that to life.
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    Mhh, i having trouble understanding the structure, maybe if you make the lines that go behind the building more thin and the lines that are in front more broad will make the image more easy to understand, also, try adding some shadows and values, i think that would help, good luck.
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    Thanks for your comments,

    Thanks kawakaze, hopefully I can do some more before the deadline.

    Christian223, I forgot to mention that the 1st sketch is the floorplan and an elevation that's why it looks confusing & on the 2nd sketch I will follow your advice with the lines as for the value, I need to update it, I just left the shadows of the 3D volumes which shape was flat on top not rounded, so I will work on that.

    Thanks again.
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    hywu Kingdom
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    Old sketches I had previously deleted. (just for reference of how my sketchbook started).

    ATAnderson, thanks for the advice.
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    Nice perspective work.....the house at the end is really well rendered. What did you use? coloured pencils?

    The first one is also very nice.
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    Nice stuff...your perspective is really good....damn you must be very paintent to draw these:
    http://www.conceptart.org/forums/att...1&d=1171491509
    http://www.conceptart.org/forums/att...1&d=1171491493

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    Thanks mull77, I used Prismacolor pencils & Chartpak Markers, I am learning to paint with the wacom but it's being kind of hard, I'll keep trying.

    Thanks Blaz, yes I am very patient, and I'm trying to learn to not be so patient, sometimes I spend alot of time that I wish I didn't.

    Thanks for your comments.
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