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    C.Revolver-My cold hard revolver. 2/14/06 Element.

    Hello, My professor recommended this site to me over DA, I must agree. From what I have seen this is a community where everyone helps each other out, and so I ask for your help to improve my line work and other various techniques such as digital paint. I started drawing about a year ago but I just started to become more serious about my work. I am currently in school for a bachelors in game art and design, I have decided to pursue a career in character design/concept art and textures for games and movies.

    Anyways I am sincerely hoping for some Critique from all or any of my fellow artists here on CA.Org. I also hope to make alot of friends here, so feel free to send me a pm sometime. No worries I plan on improving alot this year so enjoy what I have now. Thanks! (by the way I realy like my pencils)


    1st: Life drawing, My first drawing was tilted so I tried again and I believe I nailed it.

    2nd: Just a skull study I had alot more but im trying to find them haha. Thanks for looking, im going to shoot for a few sketches a day!
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    welcome bruv welcome!
    good idea to join up here. the first thing i noticed was the rather thick outline
    on the images, this can flatten shapes and in turn detract from the volume and depth (especially important in character design) so maybe try defining shapes with tone more than line? ofcourse the outline thing can work for ya, but you still need that tonal build up in there..
    the perspective on the skull looks a little off also, i HIGHLY recommend bridgeman, hogarth and loomis to help you here

    keep em coming my friend. please keep em coming, its great to have more people to share ideas with.

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    The lifestudies are pretty good. Wondering which one is the finished piece. And the skull looks great. Keepem coming.
    "Imagination is more important than knowledge"- Albert Einstein


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    Don-Key, Yeah your right about the line weight of cource and I apreciate your sugestions, I realy do. I hope you continue to watch my sketch book.

    Envisor, The first one to your left is the one I redrawn, Thanks for your stopping by, I hope you also continue to watch my sketchbook.



    I will have an update this evening, im now starting my morning drawing session. Stay tuned.
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    As Don-Key said, Bridgeman, Hogarth and Loomis is highly recommended. Personally I like Loomis' books.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Zombie_dla
    As Don-Key said, Bridgeman, Hogarth and Loomis is highly recommended. Personally I like Loomis' books.
    Get both Hogarth and Loomis and start having fun!!
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    lol

    Zombie_dla and Ashrumm I thank you both for your Encouragement But I already have Burne hogarth dynamic anatomy and Giovani Civardi, as well as others. I Hope you all continue to watch my skill grow, Thank you all.
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    Sorry about the book-bombardment then Hope you'll post often!
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    Then you only need to get loomis books, you can download them from the net since they are so old, but soo good too. There are also a couple of books i can recommend you to download, wich are Harold Speed book, Theory and practice of perspecrive, and Pen drawing an illutrated teatrise, those are the ones i have or am reading and can say are good, im sure there are more, and dont forget to see the wiki to get tutorials and other things, good luck!

    Some links to get books here:
    http://www.gutenberg.org/etext/14264
    http://onlinebooks.library.upenn.edu...pe=lccn&key=NC
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    A quick sketch for today, I did alot more but I was not confident in my line work but ill post the rest tomorrow. I like this pirate dude haha! Monday I plan dumping alot more work here because over the weekend I plan on drawing tons. Hopefully..


    Thanks for stopping by everyone!
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    Here is my sketch today, I will try to do another one tonight after class. I am hopeing that someone will critique this for improvment. Anyways Hope you like this character. Those stilettos were a pain, I think Aly Fell does them the best, surely better than me lol, anyone know his user name here? Thanks.
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    Your confusing yourself with over complicated poses and camera angles, stop that. For the beginning, if your learning the anatomy make sure ur breaking down the body pieces in a flat front view, no fancy stuff. Side view aswell. Start with the whole body, then work with different limbs at a time. This should help you later when adding complicated camera anlges.

    This will give you better oriantation of body parts when adding movement and camera angle to your figure.
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    Quote Originally Posted by Cold
    Your confusing yourself with over complicated poses and camera angles, stop that. For the beginning, if your learning the anatomy make sure ur breaking down the body pieces in a flat front view, no fancy stuff. Side view aswell. Start with the whole body, then work with different limbs at a time. This should help you later when adding complicated camera anlges.

    This will give you better oriantation of body parts when adding movement and camera angle to your figure.

    Thanks Cold I will take your superb critique to heart and try it your way. I dont understand what you mean about doing the figrue in those 2 views however, could you explain a bit more on that? Much apreciated, I hope others will give me feedback as well.


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