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    Zorn's sketchbook

    Just looking for a little critique on some of my work.

    I'll try to post as often as I can.

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    These are just some quick projects for school. One of them is modeled after an Elvgren painting.

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    initial drawing:

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    allow me to be the first to pop your sketchbook cherry! POP!

    ewwwwww

    GOOD stuff in here ZORNY, nice clean pencil stylez. A couple of crits on the cow piece. LOoks like that one monster from... nevermind. seriously: Ok, the pencil work is pretty good, but i think we're seeing a little too much residual sketch in the finished painting here...maybe try developing texture through articulating marks on the skin, subtle bumps and so forth in the sketch, with pencil... then form is a lot easier to add in the computer bc it's so much more forgiving. My eye is drawn to the quadruple eye, and then down the tongue... kind of a sick intersection there... reminds me of parasites, good good. I'm not sure if the dollops of red goo on his chest are blood or maybe just some sick organ that's protruding—> either way... feels like they should be a little bit more saturated. looks like i'm seeing some paper wrinklage or something on there? hard to tell. Good looking piece though man... what are you studying in school?

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    Some realy cool stuff here, good start to your SB!!

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    I like those pods of blood on the blood sucker. Really nice effect

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    One hundred workdays. One hundred still-lifes.

    So as an exercise for myself, I have set myself the task of painting one hundred still-lifes over the course of twenty weeks. I will be updating daily, and will appreciate any criticism that anyone can give me. The whole idea is to learn the concepts of color, lighting and form better.

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    That's some wicked color you got in there.

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