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    Just a girl sketch

    A coffee shop sketch I tried to touch up a while back, crit is welcome..especially in the "what not to do in p.s."

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    Wink lol

    wow no coments?....that bad eh? lol, ..this is actualy quite old, over a year and a half and my first attemp at working in photoshop,.. Im trying another attempt today and I think its coming along much better, I thought for sure someone would have pointed out the lopsided breasts, sloppy shadeing, improper light source work, or the poor pencil work underneath that shows through, and dont get me started on that bloody awful ear!..lol

    My next pic I hope will be somthing a little worth comenting on, ...then I will know if I am on the right track


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    haha, why do you need us if you already found all the problems? Do i sense some inspired by roundeye's workhere?
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    I take your Roundeye comment as a HUGE compliment,!
    although Im sure he will take it as a pretty big slam. lol
    Im trying to rush finish up a doodle I started this morning
    so hopefully I can post it later tonight, It takes me forever
    to get back into photoshop after not touching it for a long time.



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    What I meant by the roundeye thing is that how you made the eyes huge, and the type of coloring. Still, I do like this image.
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    DOH I thought I would have a doodle done but I had to work...sigh.....as for the eyes n stuff, since I started drawing my friends have always pointed out I oversize my eyes hands and sometimes feet! just for style sake but I never thought about painting a doodle untill I stumbled across roundeyes and spinefingers sites... and I found I liked most greyscale pictures better then their colored ones(looks darker) thats why my first attempt was like this. I am still trying to wrap my head around how someone can color a drawing so well using just markers!???
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    I think you could experiment with how you draw your chins... this looks like a very well done piece but the unrealistiic-animesque chin really ruins it for me.

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    concept of creature

    Interesting point on the chin!..I never looked at it that way, since im not an anime buff.. heres a doodle I just finished..
    I wish i could find a way to show some of the more detailed parts, but at this rez they are nonexistent, and I kind of feel silly now that I look at it and realize they arnt visable at this size at all ..lol oh well, hope you like this guy better then my other attempt...

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    this one i like, cute...like a gremlin without the fur, and maybe bigger, and different eyes and without the tail. is it sensitive to water? actually it doesnt look anything like a gremlin...the cute feel of the creature reminds me of a gremlin. nice piece tho

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    thanks for the comment as for weather it likes water?.. I thought he had a yoda feel to him so he would probably come from a swamp like planet...cource I could be wrong
    theres some perdy strange lizard creatures in the desert

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