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    Work in progress, give me suggestions

    This oil painting took me around 3 hours so far. Critique this and give me your opinion on what I should do to improve this piece. I will post and update the pictures as I come close to completion.

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    Is the painting fuzzy, or is it the photo?

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    It wouldn't be quite so fuzzy if it weren't so ungodly huge.


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    suggestion - resize the picture and post it again so it's easier to critique

    right now my biggest thing is that it needs to be defined.. not sure if it's cuz it's fuzzy from being so big, or from the paint strokes.

    But it has great potential either way

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    suggestion - resize the picture and post it again so it's easier to critique

    right now my biggest thing is that it needs to be defined.. not sure if it's cuz it's fuzzy from being so big, or from the paint strokes.

    But it has great potential either way

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