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    my first piece. id appreciate any comments

    this my first thread so dont judge too harshly anyone got any ideas on how i can improve my image. techniques, tricks or anything? Or maybe to say that i am unbelievably brilliant and surpass all others (brief glimmer of hope)

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    nice job. You might want to utilize a softer brush for blending in the facial features (shift + [ = Softer Brush // shift + ] = harder brush). Also it looks like you've done the digital painting rather quickly, you may want to invest more time around the eyes and nose. But other than that the proportions are pretty good. Im not very good with color myself- im an autodidact with that- so ill leave color for others to comment on.

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    hi
    you are unbelievably brilliant and surpass all others...
    joking aside ...this is far better than my first attempt...I suggest you use (along with softer brushes) opacity brushes/ brushes with trasparency... I personally use brushes with a very low opacity ( 12-45).. Apart from that you might also wanna use the ALT button to pick colors off from your piece.. that is always very helpful to blend 2 different values with each other..
    keep on experimenting and keep on blending...that's the DIGITAL way to get to the end..
    your color section is also good.. the darks however need some adjustment..
    there isn't much definition in them even for this style..
    I hope that was helpful

    PS;...I think the moderators are going to move this to some other sections
    cuz you are supposed to post artwork in the artwork forums..

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    Zombiekirby, you should post this image in the Critique Center subforum. There you will get much more critique.

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    Damn you! I wish my first one looked like that.

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