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    I think this is the right forum: Crit please.

    I think this is the right forum: Crit please.

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    I think this is the right forum: Crit please.

    Thanks in advance for your time.
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    I suggest that you draw legs and feet - your characters seem lacking there..
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    It looks good to me. You've got the detail for creasing clothes and your proportions look right but like the previous post mentioned, better a full-body sketch see how your characters look in all. Punisher fan huh? Haven't heard the name castiglione since The Punisher in 'Nam comics if memory serves
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    In the second pic, the guy's hand holding the pistol is way too small. If his arm is towards us, wouldn't it appear bigger?
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