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    Better late than never...[Updated Oct 21!]

    I have been a lurker for a long while, but I finally am getting into this and seriously

    Th first image is a DSG doodle, the eyes were done using referenced photos from the photo reference thread ::gasp::, and the last 2 are just some of my crappy doodles. C&C Greatly apprieciated

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    Seriously, look how hardcore I am - I can crit for three people.

    <IdiotApathy|Lurk> I think you chicken scratch too much
    <IdiotApathy|Lurk> focus on making a line and make it
    <alto_hyver> true
    <charactwerk> yeah
    <charactwerk> that'll make u faster to
    <charactwerk> too
    <alto_hyver> and if it turns out wrong, just place a new try right next or through it
    <IdiotApathy|Lurk> that will also test to see if you know what you are drawing, I think it's very important to try and visualize.

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    Hey lad, time to dispense the cookie :I
    Nice start so far, good that youre doing some form of studies, eyes or what not. As of now as mentioned by idiot apathy, you need less chicken scratch lines. Make lines and stick to them, instead of running over the lines over and over again, be confident with the mark making. Continue with the studies from life and anatomy lad, onwards!

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    @Idoit
    Funny thing is I made me a note pad file and saved those exact comment on to it

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    Yeah, now that I am looking back onto the pictures I see where you guys are right. So my plan for today: Confident Lines!

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    Boobs!

    I told myself I would go a V-Day update on this thread! So here it goes!

    Comments be brutal!

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    Hey lad, nice update. I dug the girls face so far, its showing more confidence in the line work, less scratchiness, so props. Keep drawing and studying stuff from life mate and draw alot, the improvement will come in loads. Keep those updates coming.

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    I demand more studies. And either a darker pencil, or better paper. But so far so good... Good lines and concepts.

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    Life drawing is the best way to go~
    The side view of the girl I think shows the most confidence.
    Keep doing that, and keep updating!

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    Noses!

    @ Sirio, Yeah I kept thinking "Long lines" while I was drawing and go figure it starting to work

    @ Stark, Thanks for dropping by! Make sure to bug me about your SB. I hope you like my scans a bit better now

    @ Juli, Too bad I dont have life models only picture refs...Maybe its time to hit up the strip club for "study"



    Ok I noticed that one line can totally change a nose. So simple yet so defined. I also tried to stick with confident lines none of this scratchyness crap, I think I did ok.

    Once again crits and comments are always welcome and remember be brutal, its the only way I will learn.

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    An update

    So yeah, I havent been drawing as much as I really should. Stupid distractions

    I noticed that I try to be fast about my drawing only causing it to fail miserably. So when I take my time and actually think about the structure underneath it comes out FAR better than the initial sketch.

    I also noticed that I have a problem actually getting creative on a blank piece of paper so I either go to outlets that provide topics: DSG

    Also cant wait to get paid to get me anatomy books

    Crits and comments always welcome and be brutal!

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    Fingers!

    More studies!



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    I like your studies. And now update it! As for crits, i feel like you might try to go for line quality with you studies now. Confident, long strokes that convey gesture. But then i'm a sucker for gesture.

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    Update...Finally!

    Well I havent been drawing much seeing as I have been busy, but the other day I said to myself "Lad", because that is what I call myself. So I said to myself "Lad, you need to draw."


    You can see some concepts of monsters and the like, me trying to draw a shirt, and birds...lots of bird heads...

    Like always crits and comments always welcome, so have at it!

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