Ok here's the first one. I need a lot of help guys i just got a tablet, but i don't have any formal training, and i've never painted before in my life either. Throw it at me (your opinions), but be nice. CC only, badmouthing, without telling me how to make it better will not be recieved well. Any help i can get though, i'll take.

TS:

This one, nothing special, just one of my deformed guys, and something resembling a sentinel's head..