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    Heya all, this is a poster that i am doing for a local band.

    This is my first real illustration job that pays well so i kinda dont wana mess it up so any help you could give would be sweet.

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    It looks excellent. It really puts the right message across. The only tiny thing i noticed is perhaps the buildings on the horizon far right (skyscraper's) should be learning out of the picture a bit, just for curvature of the earth purposes. But Excellent poster!

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    Hi there, i'll go straight for the crits: ( i hope you wont perceive me as rude )

    - try to separate your foreground from background, it's very flat right now, you could almost mistake the flying guy to be a giant lying on the ground.
    you can add some depth with values and atmospheric perspective.

    - work on setting up a correct perspective, it'll be extra tricky when you choose this kind of fish eye lens-perspective

    - perhaps try to clean up some of that texture, or skip it? i would say it's far too much, which makes the colors muddy. it's a subjective choise i suppose.

    good luck with the job!


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    Eclectic Rock Band Poster

    ok here is an edited version. I have changed the angle of some of the buildings to fit the fish eye lens perspective and have toned the texture back a bit. it is a bit hard knowing how much to tone the texture back, depends on what the client wants i think. I have not added to the depth of the image as this i am reasonably happy with the semi flatness to it (and it would be a lot of work as i have coloured all in one layer).

    Further critics welcome, plz be as harsh as ya want.

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