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    cartoon girl thing

    showed the wip, here's the final.
    cartoon girl thing

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    Hi Jrr!

    your colour choice is the strongest part of your picture, and usually that is what I remember the most from your previous posts. the reflective light on the face is a nice touch.
    the anatomy is a bit weaker, like with her left foot. I can see that the size is exagerated on purpose and have no problem with that, but the direction her left foot points feels wrong to me.

    there is a minor problem with the purple band that hold the Gun? attached to the right arm. It creates a conflict with the elbow, and I keep seeing the band as the elbow and therefore to high.

    liek the hair style, maybee you could push the edges a bit more.

    hope it makes anysense to to you jrr, but it regardless I like it!

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    very nice jrr..maybe its the style that u owned..she has a bro and sis look like ur avatar..just a crit..the left leg looks alil longer compare to the right due to the perspective.

    nice work overall

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    wadup J --i like this girl

    i would really like to see a fleshed out background with depth etc-- i dont think the smudged w/ white BG is doing the character justice

    i think your color usage is strong--maybe some more variety in color in the boots and hair

    the gun is cool but borders on phalic--maybe if you cut out that green thing i wouldnt think about penis so much

    i think the face is kick ass
    her left eye getsa little lost though

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    The coloring is very solid, but I think the pose could use some work. She looks a bit off balance, as if she's fighting the urge to fall to the right side of the image. I also think it would help to show her left arm, just to add balance to the pose.

    I'm not Sir Mixalot, but she's got a bit too much junk in the trunk for her figure.

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    Wow, Great!
    Yeah, the foot in the foreground should(i think) be pointed alittle bit more towards the viewer. Also something looks wrong with her "behind".

    Tyboogie - Did you have to comment on the phallic gun?! Now that is all I am thinking about also...
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    looks cool..like a girly mega man

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