Hello all, welcome to my sketchbook/dumping thread!
I have no formal training, don't think I'll be getting it anytime soon. I don't know any artists outside of the ones I know from the internet
Please crit ;D; You are my only critique line ;D;
Last edited by Derlaine; February 1st, 2010 at 02:23 PM. Reason: less blab
here is a joke image
I watched like 4 seasons of The shield at my parent's home in like 1 month :p
Wish I knew how to make sketches look finished and presentable, maybe I should add borders and textures? I suk at design
Wow, been here for 4 years and this is a 1st sketchbook thread? Looks really good! For the nude image pic, the left arm just doesn't look convincing and just looks short. In the buttocks area, the shading is more like the cartoonish kind. You're supposed to keep the shades smooth, not strong. For the bird lady, her waist and stomach area are connected in a strange fashion. It's kinda as if you gave her "too much back". For the 3rd image, I like the different facial features of each person. Though the first dude's head looks like it's connected in a strange way. Other than that, good sketches.
wow someone replied! Thanks for the crits, they are so comprehensive! Yeah I never posted much because I felt too intimidated..but I've gotten over that now. I can't improve unless I put myself out there.
I don't really understand some of your crits, like the one about bird woman's waist and stomach area.
On the naked image, I guess what you mean by cartoonish is a sharp edge? and I should have given a more smooth transition between the tones in the butt area.
wow.. I remeber you from ocad, artcorner..and other places
Welcome back to ca... ^_^
so what brought you back here
btw.. get access to the all girl forum.. if you havent..
and umm happy new year
keep it up
"I don't really understand some of your crits, like the one about bird woman's waist and stomach area."
I meant that her waist area starts widening out too soon when it should be lower, then it starts expanding (left and right). Maybe it's just me, but either that or her legs being too thin for the buttocks creates the illusion. I could be me being vague again. Sorry.
"On the naked image, I guess what you mean by cartoonish is a sharp edge? and I should have given a more smooth transition between the tones in the butt area."
Yeah. The transition from the dark to light is sharp.
really creative stuff here, post some more idesa of your own, also do more life studies and figure drawings. Also work on anatomy, its the best thing for any artist who just started a new sketchbook, it helps with the imagination. Keep posting.
My Sketchbook- C&C very welcome
all girl forum ? lol what XD *intrigued* tell me more, please? I tried looking on the forum index and didn't see it listed
old sketch of fans; it was never used by the company I work at. Maybe in the future?
I liked this in my head but on paper it doesn't deliver. I have problems with anatomy I think; they don't feel life like. Anyone can offer any help?
This is a couple of months old. She looks fucked up, but I'm not really sure how. Maybe the proportions are not right?
The original looks so much better of course lolol http://www.leninimports.com/rita_hayworth_gallery_1.jpg
Came by to say thanks for stopping by the sketchbook, Im' enjoying these latest posts. The chick with the gun is cool but the anatomy is off, its like you cut her in two and fused her top half sideways to the bottom half. The portrait looks great, but I would have to see the actual photo to see any mistakes. Doing good, keep posting.
My Sketchbook- C&C very welcome
This one http://www.conceptart.org/forums/att...1&d=1168224284
Very cool!! Very nice job with the hand.
Feel free to checkout my work:
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Tried to do a design sheet, for shits and giggles.
One of my elf characters, she is made of MAGICK and HOLY and NATURE and GOOD and PRETTIES lolololerskatez
This is Hobaba. She is made of URINE and BAGS.
Last edited by Derlaine; January 18th, 2007 at 12:17 PM.
Just screwing around in photoshop
Nice sketches. the first two look really good (the nude's buttocks look a little big though). i see you have a call for the cartoonish style...keep postin'!
Hey nice stuff here. I like your designs. Keep posting!
For the chick with the gun yeah I know how you feel, a lot of my ideas don't translate well to paper. ;P I think her body's just twisted way too much, if you turn her hips and legs toward her front a little more (toward us, essentially) she may be a bit more believable. Other than that it's an awesome concept.
eva green. She has a really distinctive look that isn't your average beauty but not deviant enough to be ugly.
omg SUP WRAT
i made a copy of a sargent painting. I don't know what I learnt though. What am I supposed to be learning from these copies of masters?
yay anime lahlz
keep up with your figures and forms!
digging those life studies
my first "color" studies of the hand. this is hard shit.the color one looks fudged up
a recent picture and studies of mucha+tree
very sweet sketchbook you have goin here . looks promising. could it be you are a bit myazaki inspired? i really like this one http://conceptart.org/forums/attachm...1&d=1169096691
keep it up!
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