Batman always makes a sketchbook look cooler...
However, it looks like you have drawn the upper part of Batman from a higher viewpoint and then his stomach from a lower viewpoint... making it slightly weird looking.
That probably didn't make any sense...
Good of you to experiment with the colors a bit more, I think it looks much stronger than the older colorings!
dmitri: yup, you're right, I see that too - this "batman" piece was somehow uncontrolled... I think it was more about playing with colour, values and contrast - batman was not the primary purpose Well... I can always say, that every dispropotion was intentional
HAHA! awesome toons man, i love the clown FINISH IT PLEAZE!
the frankestien one and the rat are also very cool... so is the elephant in post #17
i think you could push your colours more, try and go bold, a lot of your colour pieces loose some of their energy because of the flat desaturated colours. your characters are so energetic, try do the same with the colour.
Kronos: Thanks, I'll try to get back to that clown. You're right about colors - I'm fighting with them
thirdeye: Thanks! Most of this pictures are done in less than one hour, and it's sometimes hard for me to find more time. Sometimes I have lot of ideas, and I want to put as much of them on the paper as I can - but I'll try to focus on the details more.