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    blob

    the concept for this came from a doodle i did in class. i'd be really appreciative of critiques or tips for useing photoshop because it's the first thing that i've done
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    newbies are us.com

    you might get more responses/critiques
    on the sketchbook/wip threads.
    as for help keep looking for tutorials
    they're all over this cool site,
    and above all, paint everyday.
    to be like the best on this site
    you're gonna need years of hard work
    so persevere and strive to be the best and you will.
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    What kind of critique are you looking for on this?

    For what it is, I think you did good. I'd get rid of the bright orange outline on the blob, and add a definitive ground plane. The shadows appear to be...under the ground? Or maybe the blob is floating?

    Keep on painting
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    yeah, i was going for floating not too far above the ground.

    my sketch book is:
    http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=86039
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    If he is indeed floating, I would remove the 'splatter' bits around him; it appears as though he impacted and is on the ground.
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