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    new paintings need critz plz

    Hey guys,

    below are some works i've been working on. saw a lot of great works out there, especially in this site and im striving to get as good. Im looking in what I could do or could've done to make my pieces have that WOW factor. any ideas?

    thanks everyone!

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    the girl's face a tad small, or possibly make her features (ie mouth, nose) larger.
    i really like the first one. the explosion seems a little "contained" though. i think i know what you were going for, but maybe adding a few sparks smoke etc outside of the intial explosion would make it seem more alive.
    good work though.
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