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I've been visiting the site for a while and here it is my first post.
Im thinking of going back and adding more grunge to the guy, but I kinda like the clean look.
Dont know, what do you guys think any comments and crits?
Last edited by RMADA; December 12th, 2006 at 03:48 PM.
Alright well heres another one.
the original drawing was like 3" tall. But I cleaned it up a little after scaning.
i love the elephant
RMADA- Hey you got some good colors going here, thats good, but you need to keep an eye on your perspective. On the second pic, the top half and lower half dont match up, you got two perspectives going there. The elephant is really nice! wonderful colors and line work, but it needs more story, why does it look sad??
CHOCHA-chocha la panocha, Hey man you're new here so I'll go easy on you... you cant just come in here and start telling people that their art sucks...WTF is that, this is called the "CRITIQUE CENTER" for a reason, you critique other peoples work, not put down ...at least tell the man why you think it sucks. If I were you I'd edit that last post, and apologize, other wise I'll be forced to call you a little panochudo (bitch)...and wheres your artwork?chocha said: I'm sorry man but to me the guy whit the robotic arm...suck
Edit: yes I was going easy on him.
"Be who you are and say what you feel,because those that mind don't matter and those that matter don't mind."-Dr. Seuss
I really like the elephant, it is a nice little piece, it looks good already as a kind of cartoon but if you wanted to add more you could. The second one could use some improvement though. I'm going to let some professionals help you with that one though as I'm no brilliant artist and think it would be better for someone who is apt at critting to tell you what is wrong and to tell you how to improve it.
Right, after my longest post ever I just wanted to say hello and welcome to the wonderfully helpful community that is the CA
Ilike the elephantr alot more but I think his legs need to be a bit more feasible to move, right now he looks stationary...