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    Houses in the sky

    _Hi everyone, im trying to draw a finished picture on this one, still working on it but im a little confused and dont know if the composition or colour is right ? So if you see mistakes or anything thats not right, pls tell me. ^_^ Thanks a lot.
    _Ill post more as im drawing and sorry for my bad English.
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    to saturized and and could use as bit more dark tones imo,
    i did one similair to this about 2 years ago.. care to c?
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    I really like the idea you're going for! And the colors are really nice so far.

    Everything is very centered though, and you could use moving things onto the thirds. You want the viewers eye to travel comfortably through the whole painting, that's why placing your areas of emphasis around it properly is so important. When things are just in the center, the image tends to become boring, and cramped. Try moving the floating Island over to the right more, so that it is half way between the balloon and the right edge of the painting. I think that may help.

    Very nice so far though, and keep up the great work! ^_^

    ~Hanime
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