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November 27th, 2006 #1
Carni's Corner (upd.Mar18)
so i got bored with my old sb,and since everyone's warming my heart on my birthday i thought i'd give you back something and finally get my ass in gear again.
edit: Check latest page for newest pieces.
edit: PREVIOUS SKETCHBOOKS (for those who care):
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November 27th, 2006 #2
Hey, Carni.. long time! You keep starting new books... haha.. Can't keep up
http://www.conceptart.org/forums/att...1&d=1164672989 <- that one is my favourite of the batch. Seems you still don't take your time on your pieces... the ones you DO take your time with, easily stand out. Have you tried keeping the drawing in different stages at different places? Like, have the face fairly detailed, and a leg or whatever at lower detail... that way you can vary your drawing... might be that it's easier keeping up interest?
Might be that I'm not making sense... Bit tired... hehe...
Keep 'em coming!
November 28th, 2006 #3
At the moment, I guess I could suggest you to be tidier with the hatchings.
Happy birthday btw .
November 29th, 2006 #4
thanks you two. yeah,i'm an impatient bastard
dcept,funny you should pick that one,because it's actually one i didn't work very careful on...or atleast it didn't feel that way. i'm trying the variation thingy,but then again it's almost the usual outcome that my faces are far better rendered than the rest,and i'm trying to fight that.
anyways,only small pic here...did a dsg (demon vs demon in arena) after a long time again. opencanvas and photoshop,really fun stuff,though quick.
November 29th, 2006 #5
contrast!... value structure!
and pastelllllll.... or maybe htats just my sucky monitor
demons fighting in easter pink and green...lol
other than that they got a lot going fo rthem....lively... fluid..not stiff
To see the world in a grain of sand, and a heaven in a wildflower, hold infinity in the palm of your hand, and eternity in an hour.
November 29th, 2006 #6
It felt wierd seeing your name all over the forums and never seeing your stuff, so I thought I drop by. Nice stuff!
Your know our anatomy pretty good, but your values could use more contrast. Except in THIS one, you seem to just give everything a flat midtone, without any real shadows or highlights (Like in THIS one). Push the conrast!
Keep it up!
November 29th, 2006 #7
December 2nd, 2006 #8
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Hey man!, nice new sketchbook I liked your old one though, but everything
that is new is nice , so keep this one up!
Alright, I belive your one of these artist who would improve LOTS by spending 10-50 minutes extra on each piece.. I mean, I belive you draw something , and then after a while, when you think you finished, you open a new document/ switching side in your sketchbook... Instead of doing this.. When you think your finished, just draw 5 minutes more on it! JUSTDOIT!
and after that , do something else, DO NOT open a new document! or open a new page in your sb, because if you do, I belive you wont go back to your "recent" piece... therefor, do something else, for , let say, an hour or so, whatever you feel you can offer, then go back to your piece, and refine it!!
heh, my first sb was filled with lots of "impatient shit" (not saying this one is,)
but, after i made my mind up, and started to spend some time, I belive you can see a huge step between my two sketchbooks ( newest and oldest ), What i mainly did , was to spend more time thinking! and not just put the lines down on paper!
You know, when your makeing studies.. You concentrate right ? so it looks right.. If your doing hundreds and hundreds of studies, and then "just draw"
from imagination later, then these studies will help you, but not much! not at all, if you spend some time thinking of what these studies have learnt you, or what you learned by doing studies, I belive your "imagination stuff" would be 10x better...
summary, Spend more time on one piece, do not rush, you HAVE time!
December 12th, 2006 #9
thanks for all the comments again.
fun little ps doodle,45min i think.
pencil sketches coming this weekend when i've access to a scanner again.
December 12th, 2006 #10
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December 15th, 2006 #12
NOw... now.... YOU BETTER get cracking damet!! work, work, WORRRRKK IT!!!
Ok, thats about all the tough love I have today, just for the record
I think your digital approach is working, the figures look solid, just
remember that between the direct light and the shadow there is the
core shadow, that is what creates form in most cases, remember to
add it, I fell your are missing it some times...but the contrasts its
looking good especially on the blue one. 8)
KEEP it UP mate and drop some more updates, and do some ref work too!!
See ya later Pimp Daddy!!
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December 15th, 2006 #13
nice stuff mate. I must admit for me the loose brush portrait stands out. It is so much more confident that your pencil work
Check my sketchbook if you're bored
And my blog!