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    sketches i did a while back crits please

    Hi I'm 16 years old and i just want you to give me some feed back on how I am doing and dont go easy on me just get to the point and tell me whats wrong with the drawings. Thanx

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    I think you should start thinking less about the contours and more about the construction... Start sketching your subjects with big, simplified forms and you won't get so much distortion of masses as seen on this one. When you've got the basic form right, move on to details. Also, the lightings of the two first drawings and the boxing picture don't seem consistent and you seem to have a habit of lighting your objects directly from the front. You could try building them of 3d objects and think about where the shadings would appear with different lightings. Drawing more from reference would also help with your shadings. This drawing looks great! More that kind of stuff please.

    Good luck for the future and keep this thread updated!

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    Thanx for the crits i will take note of what you have said and post more images soon so you can tell me if I have improved on what you said was wrong with the drawings.

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    yeah shading is tricky and there are a bunch of ways you can do it but it is all preference

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