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    Robin and Batgirl

    In the city of loooooooooooove (Bludhaven). Wish this was canon. I always thought they were real perfect for each other . Tim and Cass, sittin in a tree...k.i.c.k.i.n.g. (the crap out of each other - only if you follow canon!)

    Long time no see CA! X_X, school/work is killing me!

    Pretty quick work this time, more practice with environments in a rather obtuse way There are quite a few big whopping errors I should've noticed, but didn't till it was too late. I corrected an anatomy error with Batgirl's back, but her front leg should probably be *behind* Robin's arm lol. Whoops. Robin's grappling arm is sort of messed up too. I should probably go fix that, since all it would take is a private message to Mike C. . Robin's lower foot...ahhhhhhhg. Plety of other issues, but I forsee much work, and less play in the coming weeks, so decided to finish it up hehe.

    Thank you all of you (if you remember) who posted in the WIP section months ago when I made the sketch for this. I appreciate it, hopefuly the anatomy issues there have been resolved in this final one !

    Detail shot at the bottom . As always, crits/comments/etc are completely appreciated.
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    The background and details are beautiful. And that cape is just gorgeous! The skin tone is so realistic. Love it!
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    Hey there. Your use of colours is great. Lovely stuff. The only thing I think stands out to me is that the figures look a little static?
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    hey jenzee, like this very much! your painting/coloring-technique is great!
    but i think batgirls head could use a little perspective. if we see her head from above, it would fit better to the rest of her body.
    and one thing, i see in many of your pictures: you give more love to the faces than to the rest.
    but over all, its a cool picture!
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    Well, thats badass.
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    Ooh, gorgeous. Very nice work. I feel like the values could be simplfied somewhat to make the overal composition work better... especially with the area around Robin's right (our left) leg and its relationship to the background.

    That's being picky though. Great stuff.
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    I love this. Great idea, subject and effort.
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    hey jenzee excellent piece. For my critique it seems that Catwoman's breasts are misplaced on her torso. They seem too low. Also, as mentioned the poses are slightly stiff, especially in their facial expressions. Otherwise, nice colors throughout. Keep it up!
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    Zen this piece is absolutely wonderful, it has a great sense of movement but the still shot and compositional style is believable. 4 stars.
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    Red face

    Jenzee,

    i REALLY love this piece, so much mood, it's great.
    i do think putting robins arm over her leg would be benificial.
    robins back leg, does look a little long, but i think it adds to this elegant pose and composition.
    Great job,
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    well, crap... This is awesome. I say "crap" because i was just drawing Cassie Cain... and I now have to start all over. Mad good.

    Just... Robin's insignia is on the wrong side. That's all.

    *clicksave*
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    hey jenzee, love this, very nice that u can still c the brush strokes,
    lovely detail shot
    as for crits

    well the breast are mentioned
    - she appears to be staring.. not looking at robin.. on purpose?

    - the blue in robins hair is a bit to bright i think (imo)

    - the black shade on catwoman's upperleg is very very dark compared to the rest

    - their is a lot of space between the neck and her left shoulder, but i guess that goes allong with the breast crit, cause if u fix the breast ull have the fix the shoulder 2


    but still great pic and it didnt keep me from saving it to my HD
    thx for sharing
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    So Robin IS straight!
    Fantastic! Spot on crits mike...
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