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    Future Battle Scene: Take 2

    This is a second try on a futuristic battle scene, its not the same as the first, but a similar idea. Heres the first one: http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?t=81815

    Anyway, Its going to be an ambush kind of thing, Im having guys hiding behind pillars and statues. There will be an army about to come through an opening gate. The room is going to look fancy and important to make the army coming through the gates seem like they are some of the best, making this ambush key to make sure these guys dont get onto the battlefield. Many of these cubes are just place holders to make sure that the perspectives are correct. I will be adding more people later on. The guy shown right now will have armor and a gun later on, right now im just making sure his anatomy is right. Crits wanted.
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    Anatomy anatomy anatomy... going back to futuristic battle scene 1, many of the crits apply to this scene too. Are you using any references? The guys left side is too small. The room perspectives seem okay so far.
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    I agre with Mofongo, your perspective is simple and seems correct but your character needs some TLC.
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    update: The block that the guy is crouching behind will become a statue that will fully cover him right now its just a place holder.
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    for some reason when i see your sketch all i can think of is the last battle scene in fifth element in the lobby of the cruise ship when bruce is fighting the bangalords... you might want to take some reference points from it(you did say a fancy room) or just watch it again cuz its such a cool movie! also just a lil crit, the guy on the far right looks out of place.... very out of place... the way he is standing is akward and unbalanced. trying to fire from that position may be harder than it looks. mabye try him kneeling (spelling)

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    Update: I know the guys head doesnt look right, but im still figuring out how to do that. Do you have a screen shot of the room, by the time I actually get the movie ill probably be done with this, hehe. You were right about the farthest guys pose.
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    the best i could do at such short notice. at work atm. hope it helps. (movie has far better scenes)
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    Well, I dont mean fancy as in an old english palace. I mean more science fiction but the room will look like it was built with care and made to look nicer than the rest of the base.
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    After a long process of trial and error, i finally perfected the armor concept I was going for. The white lines will end up being lights. Any comments?
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    You should really get a weapon into his hands as I don’t' think the hands are placed right for many weapons, cept for maybe a combat shotgun...I like the lights idea for the armor, reminds me of the hellgate London armor design in that regard.
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    Yeah, you really need to sketch in the gun when you're first posing the figure. Now you'll have to change the arms to make them look right, and that means redoing the armor on them. Just something to keep in mind next time.
    It'll help make the pose more believeable
    Try it out on the guys in the background.
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    The guy squating looks awkward. I would try changing his position or redo it with a reference photo.
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    Well heres an update, how does it look? I put guns on the other guys just to see if their hands were in the right places. What is awkward about the guy squatting, it seems ok to me except his butt looks a little wierd, i did use a reference. Sorry about the fact that the gun is a little hard to see, its hard making different shades of grey stand out from each other. I didnt say this yet, but im planning to do it in black and white to get the values down, then adding color.
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