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November 22nd, 2006 #1
My new works here, critiques please!! (18/9/2007)
Hi guys I will post my new arts here, hopefully can hear critiques especailly on my color from you guys.
Last edited by openanewworld; September 18th, 2007 at 02:37 AM.
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I think it looks awesome, nice contrast between the warm colours of the foreground vs. the cold of the background. Also realy nice details allround. The head of the alien could be arranged more dynamically, like lying on the side or just a bit skewed in perspective from our point of view. It seems a bit too 'arranged' the way it just sits there now. And is her hat about to fall off? I don't get the angle. Other than that, excellent work!!
November 22nd, 2006 #3
i like the mood you've set. and the colors are great, but i think the lighting/shadows could be a bit more intense.. good work - JAG
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November 22nd, 2006 #4
November 23rd, 2006 #5
This is an excellent piece of work.
You have done a great job of using texture to set up a very ambient and believable atmosphere.
I agree with some of the details the other members have focused on.
The head of the creature on it's side with guts and blood spewing forth would be more exciting. Maybe even the remains of the other half of his corpse somewhere in the foreground.
My only (nitpick- because it really already is a great illustration) would be to not flirt with the stance of the figure. It looks like you are wanting to push her left shoulder back and right forward for attitude, yet the arm comes down straight and static at her side- I would think- if you are going to twist her torso go all out and even have the arm out (hand even splayed) to counter balance her stance giving her an even more formidable prescence.
What do you think?
November 23rd, 2006 #6
this is so nice im not sure i am qualified to offer any crit that would even be of value.
thanks for sharing!
November 24th, 2006 #7
cool colors! like the concept.
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ITs great, its super concept, ;D there is some things but its more some distence blur, and maby some smoke and dust to ad some waight in the giant monsters aproching, maby make there legs more as if thy are moving it look like they ar waithing for her,, ;D but You rock you will make any Ad happy
November 24th, 2006 #9
Rocks d00d! gj!!!
January 1st, 2007 #10
Sorry guys I am fucked up recently, I have lost my job, lost my project and lost one of my harddisk which have my 3 years work, hopefully I have better luck this year, really sorry I haven't updated this for so long now I will update.
Gangus, thanks man great comments, about the monster head and monster crop I totally agree, I also fix the hand a bit even it is a bit difficult, thank you so much great comments man. Also your chicks air plane arts are awsoem too. Your working progress is so inspirationary. I have fixed the picture have a look.
isolatedreality, rockdraw, Cinsev, Justin Oaksford and JAG. - thanks dudes
Konceptius thanks man I will consider it
Kredepops, thanks man I will fix that point too
Last edited by openanewworld; April 10th, 2007 at 08:04 PM.
January 1st, 2007 #11
January 1st, 2007 #12
^Great character portraits. Awesome outfit designs, I especially like the guy with the sword on his shoulder - very solid piece.
January 1st, 2007 #13