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    Unhappy ambush

    Well, I'm trying to add some new stuff to my portfolio these days...so here's some of my latest attempts.I put my efford to improve my lighting skills so these are a little painful in the process... ...c&c are very welcome...
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    Interesting consept. I think the dealy in the forground (guy/ alien thingy?) is comming along good alot of attention to detail being played. Alternativly the girl in the back seems to have been secondary. her face is quite flat in comparison, with very little tonal variation. Also her breasts are a bit too high and lob-sided. I think if you gave her the same TLC as the creature it would really make this picture that much better.
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    what rhubix said about the girl, but ermn...who is ambushing who? and is the girl hitchhiking for a ride? it sure looks that way to me. Re pose the girl totaly or take her away cause it makes the cool alien thingy less cool right now

    thats all from me, good luck
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    The girl and the alien do not seem to relate too well to each other, it feels almost like two separate pictures that have been smashed together. Your rendering is nice and all, I'm just not feeling unity within the piece.
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    I sure wouldn't be smiling in an ambush....
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