He congrats to your project! I like the cover and the 3 pages. There are two little things that I noticed.
1. The American flag at the first pic, you painted the stars on the opposite site of the stack. I'm not american as you know (I think they would kill you )
2. In the pic where shepard talks through the radio his face seams to be a little bit of.
Elvis looks so cool!! You maybe did to much to his right shoulder. It kinda look like there are several collarbones. The color is great.
Keep it up
when you get to hell, tell them I sent you - you`ll get a group discount
dude sorry for being away for ages...these look sweet! i think you could have some more colour variations in the skin tones though...other than that keep at it man, you're definitely on the path of success
Your stuff really gives me a graphic design feel to it. The way you apply colour in particular is what sets it off. I think if you learned a bit more about the psychological effect of colours and placement you could really make your pieces/comics more impactful. My fav. are your portraits of spock and kirk way back on pg 2 in post 44. later
Show more like the last posts please. Frank rocks! I wish I will see a punisher comic with this kind of style someday... reminds me of the first jim lee punisher war journals from the late 80ies... early 90ies. I love this comics.
Dreamworker: Thank you! I will do more of this sketch and color stuff in the future. I also will post some sketches from the Ray Harryhausen project if possible.
kischi: Thx! Argh!!! I hope Bluewater has a 'No-Prize'... Thx for crits and great you like Elvis... but who doesn't!?
paperX: Thx for your kind words! I missed you btw
ped454: Thank you! I work on it ... and btw: I would love to draw a Star Trek story someday... that would be fun.
jedininjaman: Hey thank you! Regarding the nose: I think especially the nose of Alpha Bettie ... I think it's my style to draw those noses and I will be remembered as "the guy who draw the nose characters" hehe. Thx again! CU
Dynamike: Thx! I love those comics too. Maybe I drew him this way because of this. I started to collect US-comics with the Punisher comics from Jim Lee. Great stuff.
Here is a view into the future... a sneak peek from my creator owned project which hopefully see the light of day in 2008. The plan is to work on it after the Ray Harryhausen project. Because I will do everything myself (story and complete art) I will use a 'fast' style like shown here in this preview pic.