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    Forest Maiden

    Hi everyone. I've been working on this piece in the WIP forum for some time and I'm finally finished with it. It started out as a portrait of the singer Jenny Lewis, but it really never looked like her, aside from the red hair, and I'm okay with that. it's just some other Jenny, running through the forest.

    I'd love to hear what anyone thinks.
    Thanks in advance.
    Last edited by Jason Snair; October 23rd, 2006 at 08:56 PM.
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    Some structural issues in the face. ie. that odd little dark line that runs from the nose to the lips.

    I think the hair could feel a little more bouncy to give the impression that she's mmoving. It looks very heavy right now.

    I think the hands are nicely done though! Having just the red and green against each other looks good. The onyl thing I might suggest is to lighten the tree in the foreground to make it pop more.

    Sorry for the crits if you weren't looking for them anymore. I didn't see this in the WIP forum.
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