the last one reeks of confidence, and its awesome to see you playing around with interesting shapes in the designs and such.
my only crit, and its not really even a crit, with the guy in the foreground, his cloths are all the same value, this could have very well have been intentional, but i think it might look better if there was some contrast between his different cloths? or if it was a uniform or something maybe some kind of pattern or insignia? either way, it just seems a little dull of a design at the moment, the rest of the piece is perfectamondo!
oh one more thing, i notice you are using quite a lot of rounded off kind of shapes, they are great, but if you got some sharp edge shapes going on too it might just make them both more interesting, contrast in everything right? just a suggestion
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Hey you have some awesome pieces. You have some great ideas and designs.
Your rendering is pretty good aswell.
Maybe you could smooth it out a bit and increase your value range. Your darks seem to be washed out but maybe its just your scanner.
Anyway keep drawing and updating. I'm subscribing to this.
*saves sketchbook* *prints the best out on photopaper* *great art book*
THANKS ALOT for the awesome support everyone.
i'll reply asap, gotta go eat super.
Another one.. some already saw it.
Had alot o homework. i'll catch up the lack of updates
..oh and it's an sp... :>
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i dont know what that organic, fleshy pillareque thing is by his shoulder, but i absolutely love it i also commend your ability and patience to render those finnial designs!!! btw is who youre drawing? (haha! sorry this )
great your pencil work Daniel,really like it.
Hey Daniel, you reallyl have the skills bro, damnit.. if one day i did one pencils like you i will die happy, lol...
Cheer bro... Keep posting
hey man great update! nice of you to keep churning out these great pieces even with homework in your way!
one little thing...maybe make the irises a bit darker? they could use that extra push to draw more attention
keep up the hard work!
Dig the patterning and layering that you weave into these - you do it better and more seamlessly each time.
Rendering on the sp is damn awesome bro,
keep up this amazing book man.
Inspiring each time.
Beautiful drawings man. Seriously.
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ahh dude really nice sp . really loving the background too. Beautiful work amn.
I love the little design details you've put in there, like the swaggering line on the right side.
don't know if it is a good sp. what did you use? photo or mirror? (maybe mind )
Stark: thank you !! =)
Dile: i'm glad you're enjoying my drawings.
Dreamworker: thanks !
maxetormer: hehe i spent a good time doing 'em... makes me think i should finish that buddy asap. Thanks !!
Shinryu: I tried but the paper was all slacky (?) and annoying to draw on. Things are better now though. Thanks !!
Sonaj: Thanks ! !
Brendan: hehe looking forward to reading that crit.
Cup: thanks ! I haven't noticed that one. I'll fix it
Marco: nope, no ref .. hehe thanks !
Dan: Thanks !!
Tiger: Hey monsieur ! Things are going fine here, except the fact that it's all hot and sticky .. but i'm getting used to it (hang in the house naked.. lol j/k)
Thanks for the encouragement man !
paperx: alo ! Nah it's the paper that's acting weird. I'm back to darker darks now , thanks !
Exo: thanks !
Kronos: good point about the shapes. I'll try some more complex stuff. About the shading, it's fixed!! thanks !!
Mc2²(hope you don't mind ): Thanks !
Dile: lol .. enjoy!
Timmy: LOL... no it's an sp.. haha.. there's no way i'm drawing superman...oops now you know what kindof show i used to watch .. hehe thanks !!
Enthombed: lol...just keep practicing until your hands, eyes and butt hurt.
PaperX: thanks for the attention. i'll go and fix that one. thanks !
brendan: thanks ! i'll try
Bohemianchaos: thank you !
'nu: thanks bro !
0shade0: actually i used a mirror =)...but i don't wear that kindof clothes Thanks !
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Colors coming in the next update
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