paper, lol sure, ill do some :] sounds like fun. Thanks !
Archi, hehe yeah i got an a3 sb not too long ago, but its gonna be a mess to have it scanned, ill definatly have alot of fun to work on it. Thanks !
'nu: you smell... good curry.. :c thanks bitch
Stark, thanks, ill see what i can do on it.
christian, haha what the heck was that ? :] thanks !
matt, hehe thanks !
kyle, thanks bro !
Alex, hah thanks man !
Dan, thanks alot brothar !
mark, same here man ! We should hang out drawing often man, that drawing class was great ! :]
Stark, thanks sir !
Gilles, thanks, i checked out your stuff and its pretty good.
Alyssa, merci beaucoup !
alex, thanks man !
to Gilead, if you eventually get to read this, it was nice meeting you man. i'll come back to this class soon !
For today, some life drawing. After months and months of not doing any. I really need to do some more. Had a hard time getting to good lines and proportions, but the values were easier to find.
More soon !
Bleh, I'm sick of having no crits. So I'll just not say anything for now. Top-line stuff Dan my man. The life drawings are looking really good, I think you have a wonderful way of showing the form and making it believable. You have this awesome quality in you rendering lately that I can't find the words to describe. First class, keep it up bro.
As for me, I've been finishing up with my second year at college. Will be starting a new sb here soon, keep your peeled or I'll have to peel em for ya. Also have a thread in FF if you really do want to see what I've been up to .
Damn, these are one of the best pencils I've seen around here. Shapes and light...and everithing is so solid, I feel so misserable with my scriblings now that I'm looking at your stuff, keep up the good work !!! And you have some realy solid designs there on top of everything
Great to meet you too Daniel, your work is even more impressive in person. I didn't go back to look at the rest of your sketchbook because I had charcoal all over my fingers, but what I saw was awsome stuff.
I hope you join us for life drawing as often as you can.
hey great sketchbook. Your stuff from imagination is awesome. Great job on paying attention to the background .. i personally think it's really important esp when transitioning into painting. It's great to see you're getting back into the figure .. somethings aren't clear to me on the first figure like the neck area and her right arm (the weight bearing arm) - the deltoid/tricep area is not really worked out just seems like you put big curve in there..same for her back... but again maybe that's what you saw or it was done quickly. And I'm sure you're aware of all that without me. the 3rd one is great!! Anyways i really enjoyed your sketchbook .. good stuff... keep going!!
Thanks alot everybody for the support !!
I have to go study my maths (tomorrow exam) but ill have the replies done by tomorrow.
Here's an inca dude quickly done by pen on my afternoon break... a bit boring/bored, sorry.
last one is fun, intelligent design decisions. He seems just a tadbit stiff (not one to talk I am ), and with those muscles I don't picture him as the type of guy to surrender, but that's not a big issue. Like the lively precision of it all. Detailed but not dead - that's something you're doing better with each update.
keep it up monsieur!
someone sure likes to render!!! more linework please. rendering is the easy mindless part. spend a little more time on the actual shapes, gestures, and nuances, and you will find yourself with much more interesting stuff to render. your stuff is good and shows alot of promise, just dont get so caught up on the fun part...you gotta eat those vegetables to grow up big and strong! -c36
Solid work, man. You've got great shading technique, and some beautiful designs. I'd love to see some more work concerning shapes though, and a wider range of value, to really punch up the contrast of a piece. Maybe really render out the face or the hands, and leave some places to breath and have some fun designing shapes.
But I mean, what you're doing now is awesome, these aren't critiques so much as preferences.