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    Sup bhanu my man! These masterstudies are looking good - really good. I'd advise you to start focusing in particularlar on your technique - how you shade, draw lines, when where. To me, I think your subjects are shaping well, but your technique hasn't been seeing that kind of improvement. I think if you get your technique up to where your subjects are, you'll be churning out some masterful shiznit man.

    ciao bro, keep well!

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    Master's studies are looking great, just don't go berserk with the backgrounds In the one with the girl, that hatching on the background looks very random and distracting. I dig your comic style as well, just darken those outlines to make things pop more.
    Cheers.
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    About your Bullies, I really think it will benefit from tidying things up a little. At the moment it's really pretty messy (the upper half of the third page in particular - hard to separate the objects/panels from one another), the outlines in general could be more solid, and I also believe that you should make those hands more accurate.

    I don't know if this is just a series of rough draft/brainstorming, but I wanted to point out what I think will be helpful because I really think it has a lot of potential. I personally think it's a bold combination of colors, storyboarding and overall presentation. I reckon you got a lot of good ideas in there, the messy colors/outlines (though I still think some tidying up will do it good) link to the mental distress/disorientation really well. The use of school kid writing and first person narrative is also good for engaging the reader.

    Just my two cents.
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    Hey guys,
    Thanks a lot for the comments
    Diego-thanks for the advice, Well I am trying to bea bit slower.And tones and values need a lot of work too , thanks for reminding me all that.
    Demented-Howz my bro doin? thanks for the heavy advice.I am trying to work on my technique and all, but it doesnt much show thru my work.Dunno why , have to wrok harder.
    fedezz- thanks for the advice.I just want to let you know I really dig your work too man.Darken the outlines, will do sir.
    Jeri- I am thinking of doing cleaner work, was just trying to experiment you know.Well my hands suck, and also that I was using a pen strightforward so I couldnt correct mistakes. Thanks for the kind words too bro .

    Okay so I am really loving the watercolor medium, And have been doing some stuff , though just doodles. I wanted to show you guys some of it to get crits but they are too big, so when I get a digi cma , I might .
    Now todays update.
    Page 3 inked for Bullies
    i dont think this will be the final draft , some bad panels are really killing the whole page.
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    Well todays my Birthday,
    Nothing special , the same old things , cept I will hang out with some frends and all.
    Not much in the mood of partying either. Dunno,
    So today I will update some sketches I did in my science notebook.
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    I will do some serious updating in a couple a days.
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    Happy Birfday bro! Cool pen drawings man, real improvement! You're getting there bro, every time you post it looks better and better.

    Enjoy your day man, have a good one bro!
    ciao!

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    Happy Birthday man !!
    hope you're spending a good day =)
    The latest bullies pages are looking better.
    Keep it up !!
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    Hey guys ,
    Demented-Thank you very much.
    Daniel-Thanks bro

    So today one more page of bullies.
    And some random doodling .

    Okay so first the doodles 15 mins for both I guess
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    Bullies Page 3
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    I will put up the next page in the next few days.
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    hi mate, I notice two things, the comic strips are a lot lower in quality compared to the studies that take a few hours.

    What does this say? Quality over quantity is always the best policy.

    Going slowly lets you think about what you are doing, lets you see your mistakes a lot more clearly than if you rush. Take things slowly, do the mileage with your pencil and eventually, speed will be the byproduct of sound understanding - it is never the other way around.

    Keep up the hard work, m.
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    Thanks a lot for the comment Magic Man ,
    Less Even I think that working longer and slower helps us see our mistakes better. I am trying to work more on longer studies .And Also on slower rendering .I have some studies but they are in early stages , I will try posting them when they are nearer to completion.
    So heres the sketch.
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    SOme coments and crits would be appreciated .Hey they never hurt anybody , do they?
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    Ok so todays updates are ,
    A render I did in like one hour, size A3 The scanning didnt come out properly.
    I dont liek it but I think I gotta do more rendering.
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    A watercolor peice took 20 mins or so.
    I am still learning , some pointers with watercolors would be really helpful.
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    COmments and critique would be appreciated.
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    AFter getting frustrated from drawing bad looking nude womean
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    ANd a comic sequential for a submission.
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    Quote Originally Posted by bhanu
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    New Painted(Shaped Red)October -20-2011
    Awesome bhanu! These two particularly rock man, like the direction you pencils and pens are going in - playing around with some shapes and comps is always valuable. Realise I haven't rated this thread yet, have a buncha stars mate.

    ciao man, proud of you!

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