Hey my friend !
Good new start. the colors are working well. Are those colored pencils ?
About the first pages, i think you could spend a bit more time on those. Make a stronger shading.
Anyway, keep it up !
didn't know you had started a new sb! congrats mate!
Everything is looking pretty good mate. On the comic pages, I agree with Daniel - spend some more time on those - get those borders nice, straight and neat so the don't distract the viewer/reader. In comics, it's generally best to have everything as clean and clear as possible. Otherwise it becomes too much for the reader. Also, mixing blue pen and pencil is risky and very difficult, try to stick with media that are the same in colour.
I'm really liking these last two updates - great work dude, keep them coming!
Amazing use of space, and excellent compostitions. Nothing too unreadable. Very accurate forms and the figures have very defined structures. I have to apose that and say the uneven lines in the comics make it feel more hectic and urgent, it strikes me as interesting. Also in the comics there is a very defined demintions to each room the fore ground and the background are very easy for the viewer to seperate. Nice work.
Thanks for the comments guys,
Demented-What up brother.Good to see on my pages.I wanted to do something offbeat but yeah it didnt go the way i planned it. At first the pens were looking but later I saw I overdid it.But i want to experiment with my comic art.So I will keep doing , and yes along with that I will also try to do cleaner, more peo like work as you might call it.
Glad you liked the other updates.
Halifax-thanks for the comments man.Well uneven and rondaom lines do suggest energy .good that you found it interesting.
GLad you liked the comic .