Thanks for the comments guys.
Brendon -Thanks man. yeah My comic will be predominantly yellow , blue and green.I love pirates too. take care
Matt-hey matty boy- yeah I need to study more , so do you Hehe.GOdspeed mate.
Blanquish-hey man wussup.yeah Gotta do more anatomy, drop by more often mat.
SIlvestri-Hey man are in any way related to Mark silvestri?But When you said you 'll be back , I thought you were an ARnold fan.
Thanks for dropping by.
SO todays update
really digging the bg in the last one.
Been far too long since I've worked with watercolours for me to crit this meaningfully, but I'd say try to show form more clearly with the paints.
Go check out zhuzhu's thread, I think he still posted some of his watercolours in there.
If not, pm me and I'll go getcha a link with some of his watercolours.
They're really outworldly and something to strive for.
Hi bhanu Thank you for the high rating. Lookin over your SB. Lotsa of cool ideas flowing through, keep that up. Tame some of that wonderful energy with a bit of construction set-ups for your figures. Things like, rib cage spheres and hip boxes. Immensely helpful when setting figures in turning poses and in perspective space. But I know you are working on that. Will be popping in to see progress. Good stuff.
Thanks for the comments guys,
Brendon-Thanks for the words bro. WEll I did ask Amish commy for some advice at his thread. But yeah i will contact Zhuzhu too. ACtually right now its just trail and error for me. hehe I better get some books too.
Aztcfireflower-Thanks for dropping by. Yu deserve stars mate all 5 of em. YEah construction I have been having some problems lately with some poses. I shoudl try them out.
Thanks for the advice and yeah you are most wwelcomed to my thread.
So I did a couple fo paintings but they are too big (fuck). Liek A2 size or somethign , So I cant scan them and today I ahve some fever, not good. I will try updating as soon as I can do somethign worht scanning.
Lookin good with the anatomy studies man, good that you get to it! The bully comics quality could be a tad higher as mr magic said, seing how the quality on your other stuff beats it kindof alot actually. But I do like it, the story is cool and the crazy coloring is pretty sweet! I'd recommend more life n anatomy drawings. No revolutionary advise, I know, but its always good, I should try it sometime myself. Well good stuff mister, I'll be back.
good improvement in this SB...maybe the comic pages need to be much more refined, and you could do that by spending more time working on them.Try and use a regular lettering too.Sketches show improvement in poses and anatomy.keep sharing
Thanks for the comments guys,
Brendon -You are so right in seconding that.
Berlinsoldier-Thanksa lot man but the best guys here with watercolors are AMish commy and Mike dutton . I am just a noob with watercolor.
Orifice-Thanks for dropping by mate. SIr I am doing more anatomy and life drawings as been told. Theya re a lot so I dont post them, But I will soon do that too.
yeah the comic can get better, lazy me. Glad you like the story and the coloring.
Gnoll- Thanks for dropping by. I want to work on the comic more but time restraints really hit it hard. And I dont like redoing a page either, yes I am lazy and this attitude is bad and I am working on it.SO Updates
teh sketch is a from a pic of a fetus of an elephant . COol eh.
Second one ...guess.
Props on the elephant bro - looks like an Indian Elephant.
The ones here in Africa look a bit different, slightly bigger I think, slightly more stupid too (which is I think why they usually use Indian Elephants in the Circus haha).
The forms aren't flowing as nicely as they could though - I think this will be solved if spend some more time on it.
Water colour is very interesting and I think you may be on to something with them.
Keep doing them and see where the take you!
Hey man. nice SB goin' on here. Your willingness to experiment with colours is something to be admmired... hmmm... I should try that sometime. colours, colours... hehh.
I really like the elephant in your latest post, as well "The Ring" inspired watercolour. Try not to load your brush with too much paint when watercolour-ing; my favourite part about using watercolours is doing washes and subtle details; subtle changes in tone etc
Your comic/storyboarding looks good too. Methinks you should do some face studies - from different angles, different expressions etc.
You've improved muchly since you've started - keep it up!
As the pattern gets more intricate and subtle being swept along is no longer enough.