New Painted(Shaped Red)October -20-2011

[Brendan N]

Hey dude! Man, put attatch your avatar to your first post, then it won't be so easy to miss this thread - I'm always looking at the pictures instead of the titles lol.

Really like this one, some really good qualities to it. Water colours are looking good, try to restrict yourself to as little colours possible, or else keep them fairly pale. Right now the colours are kinda fighting in the page. Apart from each panel, the entire page should have a good composition too.

But good progress man, thanks for sharing.
ciao!

- d.

[bhanu]

Hey Brendon ,
Thanks for dropping byy.
And yeah I am working on my watercolors . Composition is really Important I must say. I am working on it.

Sketchy updates. wIll post some rendering in a few days.

[stine]

hey there! didn't see the new sketchbook for quite a while, sorry about that. great start, i really like the master studies and the coloring of the last page works great! good to see you're constantly working of your range of tools... can't help you with the water colors, though, i'm such a noob with them...

hmm, maybe someone else has already mentioned it, but anyway: the master studies have a good range of values, but maybe the contrast between the really soft pencil and the harder ones is too much? maybe you could use a slightly harder one for the dark tones... and for the rendering (which i like, but i know you don't): it always helps me to sometimes switch to a toned paper. that way you have all the mid-tones already there and can concentrate on the highlights and darks...
anyway, like that new book a lot! cheers

stine

[Brendan N]

Hey dude,

really liking the linework in these, fresh and strong.
Work some on your faces, and maybe spend some more time on your sketches.
These look a little rushed,
think you can make them go a lot further with some more time mate!

ciao man!

- d.

[DanielC]

Hey bhanu!
Don't forget to work a bit more on the anatomy. The lines are flowing nicely, but you need to work more on the details now.
..and post those Bullies pages !!

[bhanu]

Thanks a lot for the comments guys,
Stine-great to see you again In my pages. yeah I am botheres by the contrast . I know you know that I dont like harder ones but hey if it improves my skill then why not.
Thanks for dropping bya dn man , please update more often.
Brendon- Lately I have been having time problems, I barely get an hour to draw sometime evern less. So All I get done is sketches. But dont worry I ahve some half rendered peices.
Take care.
Daniel- Aye aye sir, working on the antomy already, and yes trhe details too.
thanks fr dropping by.

So todays updates
.
Stuff Sketches One is SKetchy Sp

SP close up

Colored watercolors Shitty stuff

Half rendered samurai and sketchy guy

Sketch


ANd finally BULLIES page 4


Bring on the crits. I need em bad.

[Brendan N]

Awesome bhanu,
great to see some more rendering on these!
really like that pirate dude, fun and well captured!
Your colours are coming along, like the play off between yellow and blue you've got going in that comic page, works well.
Remember the effective repetition of colours can unfiy a piece or page!
good stuff man, really impressed by all this!
Keep up the studies and the good stuff!

ciao!

- d.

[MattGamer]

keep up the good work and studies, mate! study every second of everyday. you know those 30 minutes you reply on CA (like i'm doing now lol) could be used to study objects in your house or just the lighting of things and maybe even anatomy. nice comic...cheers!! ;]

[blanquish]

looking good.
I think your skills are catching up to your excellent imagination.
Treat your ignorance with solid doses of anatomy and ref work.
keep at it

[silvestri99]

Nice work in here! I like the bold colors and all of your experimentation. Keep working on the anatomy and layouts!! I'll be back.

[bhanu]

Thanks for the comments guys.
Brendon -Thanks man. yeah My comic will be predominantly yellow , blue and green.I love pirates too. take care
Matt-hey matty boy- yeah I need to study more , so do you Hehe.GOdspeed mate.
Blanquish-hey man wussup.yeah Gotta do more anatomy, drop by more often mat.
SIlvestri-Hey man are in any way related to Mark silvestri?But When you said you 'll be back , I thought you were an ARnold fan.
Thanks for dropping by.
SO todays update

wIll update more later today prolly.

[Brendan N]

Hey bhanu,
really digging the bg in the last one.
Been far too long since I've worked with watercolours for me to crit this meaningfully, but I'd say try to show form more clearly with the paints.

Go check out zhuzhu's thread, I think he still posted some of his watercolours in there.
If not, pm me and I'll go getcha a link with some of his watercolours.
They're really outworldly and something to strive for.

ciao bro, keep killing!

- d.

[AztcFireFlower]

Hi bhanu Thank you for the high rating. Lookin over your SB. Lotsa of cool ideas flowing through, keep that up. Tame some of that wonderful energy with a bit of construction set-ups for your figures. Things like, rib cage spheres and hip boxes. Immensely helpful when setting figures in turning poses and in perspective space. But I know you are working on that. Will be popping in to see progress. Good stuff.

[bhanu]

Thanks for the comments guys,
Brendon-Thanks for the words bro. WEll I did ask Amish commy for some advice at his thread. But yeah i will contact Zhuzhu too. ACtually right now its just trail and error for me. hehe I better get some books too.
Aztcfireflower-Thanks for dropping by. Yu deserve stars mate all 5 of em. YEah construction I have been having some problems lately with some poses. I shoudl try them out.
Thanks for the advice and yeah you are most wwelcomed to my thread.
So I did a couple fo paintings but they are too big (fuck). Liek A2 size or somethign , So I cant scan them and today I ahve some fever, not good. I will try updating as soon as I can do somethign worht scanning.

[Brendan N]

Yu deserve stars mate all 5 of em.

tha' mate is mam, man.

- d.